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Reviewer: westernway
Signed
Date: 04/23/06 - 07:08PM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
I just read through this whole story in one sitting! So good! I really like it and the idea is very original. I really liked how you waited for fourteen chapters to keep Al and JC from actually getting together, it made for suspense and kept me hooked until the end of the chapters. Great stuff, good imagery, and the characterizations are spot on! Great job, can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: grishy
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/06 - 03:14PM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
It was great, keep going please
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/06 - 02:17PM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
Finally!!! Good one hon!!!
Reviewer: adidas76
Signed
Date: 04/23/06 - 12:09AM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
Yes! This is what I've been waiting for. Almost makes me forget about the crazy stalker person, almost. lol Great chapter, I'm looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Kayla
Anonymous
Date: 04/22/06 - 10:36PM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
love the story! cant wait for an update!
Reviewer: FantaCwriter
Signed
Date: 04/22/06 - 10:21PM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
Whoo-hoo! It's about time they kissed! Great chapter and so wonderful to see her let JC see her not-so-tough side.
Reviewer: Kim
Anonymous
Date: 04/22/06 - 09:50PM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
Another update! How awesome is that? I loved it. Thanks!
Reviewer: maureen
Anonymous
Date: 04/22/06 - 09:42PM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
AWESOME!!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!
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