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Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 04/03/06 - 11:11PM
Title: Prologue
I like it so far. Seems like an interesting idea. Is the story title inspired by Heather Headley's song "In My Mind"? Cause that's my jam right now! lol The only thing I think was weird was how the POV went from 1st person with the he/she/me to 2nd you/I/us. Anyways, update soon! I'm intrigued.
Author's Response: Lol it is, I absolutely love that song and the cd! Sorry about the point of view switch lol i had a million things going on at once so i must have done it while i was talking, i\'ll get that straightened out, thanks I\'ll try and update soon :)
Author's Response: You know what it was lol its the switch of her talking about them, i know it can get very confusing, in the first chapter when we get names it should be easier to follow lol thank ya so much for the review, I need some sleep *skips off*
Reviewer: Lauren
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/06 - 09:44PM
Title: Prologue
Nice start, update soon.
Reviewer: Marisa
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/06 - 08:44PM
Title: Prologue
She loves him, and I think that eventually she's gonna get him because he probably will admit that he loves her back. Update again soon you have me hooked.
Reviewer: Karen
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/06 - 08:03PM
Title: Prologue
I like this so far, update soon.
Reviewer: Sara
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/06 - 07:46PM
Title: Prologue
I'm veryyy intrigued! Update this again soon, I really wanna see what's going to happen between the pair.
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