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Reviewer: kahlymilla
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Date: 09/15/06 - 04:42PM
Title: Comes Back Around
Oh God, the shit is about to hit the fan! When Justin shows up on Nicky's porch T will shit her pants. lol. And poor Justin, when he finds out he's dating the friend of his former lover, his mind will be all fudged up again. Anyway, I'm kind of happy Shane saw through T's lie, she needs to admit to herself that she'll never let Justin go. I want to see T and Justin together, but they need to work out some shit first and now with Nicky. Can't wait for the next update! We're 6 pages into Chapter 12 of Sexual Suicide so we'll probably finish it next week on our break.
Reviewer: Veronica
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/06 - 04:25PM
Title: Comes Back Around
OOOO I bet i kno who it is. Man i cant wait for more!!!!!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 09/15/06 - 01:38PM
Title: Comes Back Around
"I just like to see you sweat." I liked to see him sweat, too. But for an entirely different reason. ;) haha "I take it you don't like them." You could take it that way. Or you could take it and shove it up your ass. All up in ya ass. haha "What is he?" I asked curiously, "A movie star? A basketball player?"
"Something like that. . ."
The fates wouldn't be so evil as to make that be Justin, would they? "That's Miss. Peterson to you." Gawddamnit, apparently, yes they would.
"Girl, you're gonna love him, I swear."
"I bet I will," I bet you already do. :( I can't wait 'till the next chapter! Nicky seems cool and all, but for some reason (that even I don't understand just yet) I want Teresa and Justin together. I keep trying to picture Shane with Channing's face and body... but I just don't like Shane most of the time so it's hard for me to make that connection. But I loved towards ending of the scene with him and her where they're talking about how she's love with Justin and she acts like she'd let Justin go for Shane and he says 'I don't believe you.' I could picture the whole thing in my head and it had primetime TV drama written all over it. haha Great update. Update soon!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/06 - 08:38AM
Title: Comes Back Around
The second she said Nicky, I KNEW *lol*
Reviewer: vessy
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Date: 09/15/06 - 05:29AM
Title: Comes Back Around
i love it, why do you have to end it like that, i can't wait to see what happens, update soon!!!
Reviewer: Thuggist
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Date: 09/15/06 - 04:42AM
Title: Comes Back Around
Uhhh oh!
Reviewer: Thuggist
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Date: 09/15/06 - 04:30AM
Title: Crowded
you wrote that scene so well. kudos
Reviewer: Thuggist
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Date: 09/15/06 - 04:15AM
Title: Excitement and Misery
"Ew, Trace," I said, causing him to turn and look at me.
"What?" he asked.
"You've got a condom on your butt."
"Dude, what the fuck?" LMFAO priceless.
Reviewer: Thuggist
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Date: 09/15/06 - 03:58AM
Title: Knock, Knock
This is so like real life its scary.
Reviewer: Thuggist
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Date: 09/15/06 - 03:02AM
Title: Bittersweet
Poor Justin :[
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