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Reviewer: princess
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/06 - 11:33AM
Title: Knock, Knock
fabulous! I feel so sorry for him and I want to kick her ass. He seems naive and I would say he was but I understand exactly how he feels. More soon please and are we gonna get anymore of shattered or was that just a teaser?
Reviewer: vessy
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/06 - 08:13AM
Title: Knock, Knock
love it! keep up with the good work and don't let us wait so long this time :)
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/06 - 05:32AM
Title: Knock, Knock
Witness the astonishing will power of Justin. Not. Uhh, that boy frustrates me. More soon, kay? :o)
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 05/17/06 - 12:31AM
Title: Knock, Knock
wow that was a great chapter hun.. oh an i loved the store clerks name *Amber* hehe hence it's my name.. lol can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Silverbaby
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Date: 05/17/06 - 12:30AM
Title: Bittersweet
Nice opening chapter. I'm intrigued.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 05/16/06 - 10:46PM
Title: Knock, Knock
Teresa's head is just as screwed up as Justin's. The whole time Shane's trying to admit that he's been fucking up, she's busy trying to talk away his guilt. Meanwhile she has Justin on stand-by, who's perfect for her! But she, for some reason, would rather stay with the man who cheats on her and who she cheats on. Genius. lol Love 'tis complicated, I suppose. But it could all be so much easier, if Justin would just take his mother's advice. I wonder what she even sees in Shane. What makes him better than Justin? Just because he's not as available, giving her a lil' then pulling away for awhile, which makes her want more?
Anyways, good job so far. The complications make it interesting. Update soon!
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 05/16/06 - 10:27PM
Title: Knock, Knock
What is wrong with these people?!!! Teresa cheats on Shane, Shane cheats on Teresa and Justin is just stupid for letting her play him like this!! Ugh!! I wanna slap him out of it!! Good update, I like complicated characters. Más por favor!!
Reviewer: kahlymilla
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Date: 04/22/06 - 09:15PM
Title: Bittersweet
Aww that was sad and emotional. I want to call Teresa a bitch for hurting Justin, but I can understand her situation. She can't move on from Shane, just like Justin can't leave her. Hopefully, when they both realize their problems it won't be too late. I love the advice his mother gives too. She didn't seem to take his side just because he's her baby. She remained neutral but nuturing. Ooh I like that last phrase. LMAO. -Milla
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 04/19/06 - 09:13PM
Title: Takes Two To Tango
hey!! i'm kinda lovin this whole 'i hate her but i can't breath without her' kinda thing. it keeps things interesting!! can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: mizalmighty
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Date: 04/18/06 - 10:11PM
Title: Takes Two To Tango
Stupid Teresa. How can she stay with that asshole Shane, when Justin is there and loves her?! Justin deserves so much better than that!!!
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