Okay, first of all heffa, I better be the first review on this. Second of all, I read the end of Love and Forgiveness and that shit was bomb. I didn't write a review yet, though. Now, I'm pissed at you for not contacting me lately bitch. What else can I bitch about? Hmmm. You haven't read my story either, SLUT. Okay I think I'm done bitching. Onto to review. You cow--stop bitching about it being bad, when you know it's great! :p I mean, starting a story out with sex...how much better can we get? Hahah. Mary J, you're such a dirty slut! Virgin my ass. :D Wow, Justin sounds like a fucking pussy. Hahah. Aww, just kidding. Poor Justin. He's in love and the chick doesn't love him back. I think he needs to get some guts. Hopefully, as the story continues he will. Because I am not, nor ever will be an advocate for ignorance. hahah. I better get a speedy response to this, too, skank, cus you know I'm vip, aren't I? :( hahaha. I hope you enjoyed this...colorful...review, Mary J. ;)


Author's Response: ROFL! Jess, you are so damn HILARIOUS! You know I can\'t be laughing this late, child. The old people on my block are sleeping, LMAO! I\'m sorry for not reviewing your story, hobo. I guess I\'m just a lazy mofo, LMAO! I WILL get onto that during my break from school! Just because there\'s a little bit of sex in here, doesn\'t mean I\'m a slut. I think we all know that would be your title, LMAO! Or Chris, whatever hoe comes first! Wait a minute, that came out wrong. . . wait, so did that, LMFAO! Anyways, my yahoo\'s trippin\', but damn it, I\'m gonna try and sign on one of these days and we will talk for hours, biatch. YOu know I loves ya, babe. Thanks for the . . . colorful review, LOL