Reviewer: Hollywood Lancelot
AnonymousDate: 05/03/06 - 12:23AM
Title: Three
You are genius...all you girls are....obviously
Author's Response: why thank you lil lady
Reviewer: Beth
AnonymousDate: 04/27/06 - 05:05PM
Title: One
I loved this chapter. I hope that you update very soon. ITs going in a good durrection.
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you, Hope we dont let you down with the next one.
Reviewer: DreamerSignedDate: 04/27/06 - 11:32AM
Title: One
It seems interesting and I would like to continue reading it but you can't kep everything in a big paragraph like that. No one likes reading huge paragrapghs. Everytime someone new talks, you should start a new paragraph. It'll look better. CAz I know when I see huge paragraphs I never read those stories. But good job.
Author's Response: Thanlk u so much for the tip. Its great to hear something constructive when youre a newbie, I well we appreciate it.
