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Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 06/23/06 - 11:30PM
Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy! I got scared there for a second. I thought he was going to hurt him, and I couldn't take it if he had to suffer again. Still, I have the feeling that he'll have to, eventually. I had missed this story, I'm glad you updated.
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 06/23/06 - 02:46PM
Title: Chapter 5
WOAH WOAH WOAH!!! WHAT THE FUCK? What is AJ doing? Is he fucking crazy? I can't believe he would do that when Nick was right outside the door? That is so messed up. Great chapter girl.
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 05/27/06 - 02:01AM
Title: Chapter 4
it's cute, i like it so far...the scene with his mom made me want to cry...tear...eek...good job
Author's Response: Yay! I love causing tears hehe Thanks for leaving feedback, I hope you continue to enjoy as further chapters come out!
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 05/24/06 - 10:16PM
Title: Chapter 4
I need to say a few things if you don't mind: 1) I really like this story. Please don't think for a minute that I don't enjoy reading it because I do. And it's not like I usually read slash stories, being straight myself makes it a little weird to read about guy on guy action. Not that I have anything against gay people because I certainly don't. Living in a country as homophobic as mine makes me sick. Nobody has the right to judge other people's choices. We're all God's children, have equal dignity, and deserve respect from the rest. Especially in a society where anything that's different is put down by others. I don't know what is it about this particular story that gets to the bottom of my heart, even if I find it strange at times. Maybe it's the way you describe Justin's feelings in such a human way. Or maybe it is because we all can relate in some way to that feeling of not belonging. 2) That explicit description of Nick's...you know...THAT, definitely caught me off guard. I had never read such a vivid description of a man's...thing. But don't mind me I'm just a prude and I so need to have an open mind about that kind of stuff. 3) Things are moving quickly between Nick and Justin. And even though I'm happy for him, it scares me that he could get his heart broken again. 4) I can't tell you how relieved I am now that he decided to stay with that family. They seem to be kind and willing to help him. And that's all for now. I'm so sorry to bore you to the point of tears with all my rambling. Boy, you better update soon...I'll be waiting!!! Author's Response: ok I\'ll reply in order :p 1. Well said! We need more people in the world with open minds, so yay you! 2. *blush* That scene was actually easy to write, I just went with it and well you read the result lol. 3. You\'ll just have to wait and see what I\'ve got planned for Justin hehe 4. Justin isn\'t stupid, but theres plenty time for me to prove that wrong :p 5.(okay I know there wasn\'t a fifth hehe Thank you sooo much Violeta your feedback really does mean so much!
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 05/24/06 - 10:03PM
Title: Chapter 4
that was good.. i really enjoyed it.. can't wait for more! :P
Author's Response: Thanks so much :D
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/06 - 07:14PM
Title: Chapter 3
Yay! You updated? And did you get my e-mail?
Author's Response: Thanks, and yeh I got it. Ive been away and just super busy, sorry for the delay in replying...
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 05/15/06 - 03:52PM
Title: Chapter 3
that was really good.. great update.. i love how you have put lance in this.. :-D it rocks girl.. keep it up
Author's Response: I tell ya, I\'m gonna get a complex if you lot keep calling me girl, hehe. Thanks, I just couldnt resist putting Lance in there as a good guy :)
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/06 - 11:51AM
Title: Chapter 3
Finally he found people who treat thim like part of the human race!!!!! I hope he stays with them, they seem to be good people. And do I smell the beginning of a crush? Keep'em coming honey!!! I'm hooked on your story!! Besos!! ;) Author's Response: :) Thanks!
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 05/06/06 - 10:39PM
Title: Chapter 2
Wow, that was really good.. it pulleda t my heart strings.. i feel so bad for justin. having no family must suck man.. great start.. i can't wait for more.
Author's Response: hehe and you\'ll get more real soon :) Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 05/06/06 - 09:34PM
Title: Chapter 2
Another good chapter! Just one suggestion though - towards the end it all seemed to turn into one big paragraph that was kinda hard to read. Try making each person's dialogue a separate paragraph.
Author's Response: :) see I need more people who are willing to tell me when I make a mistake! Thank you, I\'ll watch for that in future chapters.
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