Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 05/06/06 - 05:03PM
Title: Chapter 2
Ay Dios!!! Why is it that men always find some way to make us miserable??? Ugh!! I hate'em all!! Just kidding. Good work. I really like it. Please write more...I can't wait to see how it goes for him in L.A ;) Author's Response: Awww! Don\'t hate me please, I promise you he\'ll get happier soon. Thanks for reviewing your words mean a lot :)
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 05/02/06 - 10:46PM
Title: Chapter 1
Oh God!! Poor Justin!! This is just too much for anyone to take. Your best friend not only turns his back on you but also puts you in the hospital, and your mom disowns you!! I like it. It's heartbreaking though. More soon!! Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. There\'s a little more sadness to come, but I promise he will be happy soon :)
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 05/02/06 - 07:55PM
Title: Chapter 1
That's just sad. Thanks for making me cry girl. I hope you're proud of yourself...lol. Seriously though, you need to continue this.
Author's Response: Hehe very proud! I made a girl cry! :p Nah Im sure the next chapter wont have the same effect. Thanks for the feedback.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 05/02/06 - 07:14PM
Title: Chapter 1
I like this so far! It's very well written.
Author's Response: Thank you, I was worried my lack of experience would show...
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