Reviews For Unspeakable
Reviewer: isis Anonymous Date: 06/09/06 - 12:17AM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

this was a great chapter!!! cant wait for an update

Author's Response: Thanks Isis. An update is coming soon! - Amanda


Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous Date: 06/09/06 - 12:17AM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

awwwyou got married and i didnt get invited....damn!!j/k glad you had fun.   anyway the story--i love it but im sure you knew that.  viv wasright with the what ifs  they're kinda pointless now since things have already happened.  im not really sure were i stand with abortions but i think viv did make the choice she felt was right.  i mean is she was going to look at the child and see a mistake she might become distant or worse like her mom.   Plus she was thinking of justin, maybe not what he might have wanted but what he need at the time.  so i feel bad for both parties involved. like i said above i love the story and the twist you keep putting in here. cause i wasnt expecting the abortion blow up so soon. but keep up the good work.



Author's Response: My goodness you are just wracking up the Gold Stars! I\'m so glad someone caught that Vivian might turn out to be like her mother...so hurrah for you! I\'m glad you liked this update and thanks for the feedback, I always love to know what you guys think! - Amanda


Reviewer: Violeta Anonymous Date: 06/08/06 - 11:22PM Title: Sweetest Goodbye

Ugh!!! I do not agree with Vivian's pety explanations!!! So she got rid of her baby for Justin's sake, that's a pretty lame excuse. It seems to me that she wants to play the martyr here, throwing all the guilt on Justin. "That scandal would destroy your career" Please!!!! She wasn't thinking about Justin's career, If she had been, she could've kept the baby and raise him herself. There are younger girls with worse lives than hers that have managed to do it, so why couldn't she? I think she was just being selfish and took the "easy" way out, which happens to be the hardest one in the end. Because now she'll have to add one more trauma to her tragic life.

Huff! I needed to get that off my chest. Great work as always hon!!! I'm waiting for the next one!



Author's Response: Violeta, thanks for the review! I agree with you on some levels and you\'ll see the outcome of Vivian\'s decision come back to haunt her. Karma is a bitch. But thanks so much for the review and for reading the story this far! I\'m glad you\'re liking it :) - Amanda


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/08/06 - 06:36PM Title: Hold On

Okay so i am late in reading this but if you have read my posts on my site then you would know my internet got shut off for a week.. So what to say about this chapter.. hmm damn it was good.. it was heartwrenching.. you made me teary-eyed which isn't hard to do cuz i cry about anything anymore. Damn I'm really feeling for justin here, to know that you had a child but it was aborted that has to hurt.. an then find out from a doctor that is double hurt.. but hell that's drama baby at it's best! Awesome chapter i can't wait till you update! please do it soon so i dont go crazy with wanting to know what happened.. Great job girl! -Ambs <3

Author's Response: Yeah, I hope you got your internet working again Ambs! I don\'t know what I would do if I didn\'t have Internet! lol. I\'m glad you liked this update and yes, I love myself some drama! lol There\'s more coming so strap yourself in m\'dear! Thanks so much for the review and thanks again for everything! - Amanda


Reviewer: sugarsweet323 Signed Date: 06/02/06 - 05:04PM Title: Hold On

this was really good.  i was surprised when i found out she had an abortion.  and i want to know what the woman answering adam's found meant when she said she was something like his business partner.  the boy better not be cheating on vivian.  anyway i absolutely love this story.  keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thanks sugarsweet! Glad you liked the chapter and yay for being surprised about the abortion! I\'m glad I threw people for a loop with that twist as many fics before people have caught onto the twists and have called me out about them before I actually posted them, therefore spoiling the surprise for the other readers! Thank you so much for the review and don\'t worry, you\'ll find out what Adam\'s up too in the not too distant future ;) - Amanda


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 06/01/06 - 03:27PM Title: Hold On

OMG!!!!OMG!!!OMG!!! THIS WAS REALLY HARD FOR ME TO READ!!! I COULDN'T HANDLE IT!! BUT THEN I MADE MYSELF READ IT AND I LOVED IT!!! IT WAS AWESOME!!! I AM SO EXCITED NOW FOR MORE!!! SHE IS GOING TO BE STAYING WITH HIS MOTHER!!OH BOY!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHEN ALL SHIT HITS THE FAN ABOUT HER ABORTION!! THAT IS GOING TO BE CRAZY!!! WELL UPDATE ASAP!!! CAUSE U ARE ON A ROLL


Author's Response: Thanks again Vegas Chick for your support and reviews! I\'m glad you liked that chapter and another one is coming up real soon! Thank you so very much! - Amanda


Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 01:22PM Title: Hold On

dammit that WOULD be a cute kid! LOL! oooo update soooooon



Author's Response: Kayla, I know right? Damn cute baby and I loved that line in that chapter and I\'m glad someone commented on it! Gold star for you!! Update coming soon! - Amanda


Reviewer: Ivonne-Marie Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 10:12AM Title: Hold On

One word to describe this chapter.... AMAZING! Hope you update soon.


Author's Response: Thank you Ivonne-Marie, I\'m glad you liked this update, and another one will be coming soon! Thank you, thank you, thank you! - Amanda


Reviewer: joone Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 09:52AM Title: Warning

ok so ive been busy lately that I have just caught on to the sequel ... i was planning on leaving a feedback up until the last chapter you have but ... but ... OMG! abortion! it was juju's baby!

cant wait to read the next ... oh and hey! thanks for the special mention on your thank yous... hehehe made me feel special! 



Author's Response: Of course I would thank you joone, you made the success of the last story happen with your great reviews and positive feedback! I\'m glad you were able to find this sequel and thank you for checking it out! I call him Juju too, among other things lol! Thank you so much for the continued support, I appreciate it! - Amanda


Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 08:58AM Title: Hold On

I feel so bad for Justin and Vivian. MY heart hurts for them. And who's going to take care of Vivian in Tennessee? His momma? That'd be interesting to say the least!! I hope they can talk about this soon!!

Great Chapter, Amanda! I can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much Sarah! I\'m glad you liked this update and yeah I know I\'m absolutely horrible to my characters lol! And you\'ll find out next chapter who\'s gonna take care of Vivian although I\'m sure you don\'t have to guess! Lol! I\'m so glad you liked it and thank you for your continued support :) - Amanda





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