Reviews For Unspeakable
Reviewer: VEGAS CHICK Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 08:27AM Title: Warning

OH MY GOD!!! MY MOUTH IS LIKE HANGING OPEN AFTER I READ THE LAST LINE!!!!! HOLY SHIT ON WHEELS SHE GOT AN ABORTION!!!! JUES CHRIST!!!! IN SHOCK RIGHT NOW!!!!


Author's Response: Lol! I\'m glad I was able to shock you Vegas Chick, I didn\'t know if that would be possible ;) I\'m glad you liked the update! - Amanda


Reviewer: Amy A Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 03:59AM Title: Hold On

Wow, this was another great chapter as it's left me so confused and filled with questions,lol, so i can only imagine how poor Justin must be feeling and i'm suprised he was able to control his outburst. I only wonder now whether Leslie put 2 and 2 together and releasied why Justin reacted the way he did when she told him more about the abortion. I'm a prolifer (against abortion) myself but i'm sure if Vivian did have the baby Justin wouldn't be as happy as he thinks he would because it would have possibly been a huge scandel & he would of lost Britney and most of his Teenybopper fans, plus he would of possibly hated Vivian, hence, an abortion may have been the only plausible option, right?  Anyways i'm gonna stop blabbing on & just say great update & VOTE AMANDA/WESTERNWAY! Update soon xxx.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review Amy! I love reading the long ones :) I knew writing about abortion would be a touchy subject to write about since its such a big topic of debate nowadays. Hopefully I\'ve been able to stay on the fence with my writing as I believe a few things are good about abortion (rape victims etc) and others are bad (teenagers who take the risk of having unprotective sex). But this isn\'t a debating archive, this is *Nsync fiction and I\'m glad you liked this update, and thanks for voting :) - Amanda


Reviewer: angel_from_africa Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 03:07AM Title: Hold On

i like it!! Justin is so sweet after so much he's gone through!! I hope they work it out!! Good job!!!


Author's Response: Thanks angel, I\'m glad you liked it! Hopefully they\'ll be able to work it out but you\'ll have to stay tuned for the next chapter which should be up either today or tomorrow! :) - Amanda


Reviewer: Lizzy3218 Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 02:14AM Title: Hold On

OMG. Poor Justin. I definetily feel for him. I know him and Vivian had problems when she left but she could have at least told him about the whole situation. It was his baby too. She had other alternatives besides abortion. ahem... sorry. I just have this thing with abortion. Anywayz, great update and I can't wait to read the rest of the jaw droping drama.

Author's Response: Thanks Lizzy! I\'m glad you liked this chapter and thank you for sticking by this story. I promise there will be an update either tonight or tomorrow, I\'ve been so busy! lol but thank you for the review! - Amanda


Reviewer: canthony Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 02:13AM Title: Hold On

Please update soon!! I love this story



Author's Response: Hey canthony! Thanks for the review, I\'ll try to update soon! - Amanda


Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 12:57AM Title: Hold On

well Tennessee.....:) i wounder why??lol  I cant believe Leslie told Justin about the abortion, cause Adam doesnt know....This will be very interesting to read about.. and how will the information about the abortion and viv / the hospital scene effect justin.. will he get over  it or will he dwell on it and let it ruin the friendship viv and him have?? well now that ive vented a little im gonna go  i love the twist in the story and cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Jenna, seriously I need to stop handing you out gold stars lol! I love how we\'re on the same mind length here and you get the little hints I drop! Woo hoo! And the only reason why Leslie told Justin about the abortion was because he asked about it and if there\'s one thing Leslie can\'t do, its lie. I\'m glad you enjoyed this chapter and that you\'re liking the twist in the story as well! Thank you so much for your reviews and continued support! - Amanda


Reviewer: stacey Anonymous Date: 06/01/06 - 12:26AM Title: Hold On

ummmmmm i cant wait for the blow out. seriously. im itching for it. justin is confusing me too actually. i mean, not literally. i would've expected him to pick one emotion and go with it rather than so many mixed ones but i get why you did it that way. i cant wait for these 2 to hash it out. seriously so excited.

Author's Response: I can\'t wait for the blow out either! Although it won\'t be what you expect. ;) To me, Justin is a really complex and difficult character to write, especially with the situation he\'s in. As you can tell he\'s very close with Vivian but he also has his rough patches with her and while he just wants to completely and totally tell her off, he knows that she\'s in a fragile state and he has to be careful. Thank you for the encouragement and for the review, it is very much appreciated! - Amanda


Reviewer: Violeta Anonymous Date: 05/31/06 - 10:56PM Title: Hold On

Vivian is seriously messed up. Abortion? Alcohol? Drugs? That's too much for anyone. And I honestly feel sorry for Justin. It was very unfair of her to just get rid of his baby and never even tell him that he was gonna be a father. You're not supossed to do that!!! She should have told him!! They could have worked something out!! Well, she didn't. And there's no turning back now.

Again, another great chapter dear. What I really want to see now, is Vivian's explanations to Justin....it shall be VERY interesting to see how he snaps at her, cause I have a feeling that he will. Because he really should tell her a few truths and put her in her place, as well as make her see that she's better of with him than with Adam.

Okay, enough ranting. I loved it and can't wait for the next one. Adiós.

P.S: Looks like I finally found my voice ;)



Author's Response: My goodness Violeta, you did find your voice! Lol! I\'m glad you did because it was a joy reading your thoughts on Vivian and the abortion and everything! I definitely take reviews into account while I\'m writing an update and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations! Thank you for the review and the constant support. Rant away my dear! - Amanda


Reviewer: isis Anonymous Date: 05/31/06 - 10:20PM Title: Hold On

i love it!!! please please please update soon!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Isis! I\'m glad you liked this chapter! I\'ll update as soon as I can, I\'m writing Chapter 8 now! Thanks for the review! - Amanda


Reviewer: jenna Anonymous Date: 05/31/06 - 12:20AM Title: Warning

awww what an terrible way to find out about an abortion...i want to cry.  poor viv for going through that alone ( even though she made that choice to do so )...is that what leslie meant when she told justin that she was sure he didnt have  a clue about her medical history??  i am completely beside myself now cause i gotta wait for the next update :)  

Author's Response: Oh you just got another Gold Star, Jenna! Thank you for picking up on the small hint I gave at the beginning of the chapter :) That is exactly what I meant lol! Hooray for you, Oh I am so tickled!! Thank you so much for the review and I\'m glad you liked this update! Don\'t worry, the next chapter will be here before you know it! - Amanda





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