Reviews For Unspeakable
Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 05/29/06 - 03:08AM Title: Strong Enough to Break

Okay that was good.. damn an ADAM that fuckin tard!! he best not be cheatin on Viv! or i'll gastrate him!! lol actaully no i wont.. but hey that would leave viv open for justin hmm.. lol i know im a dork!! i loved the update deary! can't wait for more!! GREAT JOB! -Luv Ambs



Author's Response: Thanks Ambs! Can\'t say anything about Adam just yet. I\'m smiling like an idiot right now thinking about what\'s in store for you guys! Woo hoo, I love writing this story so much! Lol I guess that\'s why I update all the time because I love to get feedback on it! I\'m so glad you liked the update and a new chapter should be up within the week. Have an awesome Memorial Day, sweetie! Talk to you later - Amanda


Reviewer: jenna Anonymous Date: 05/29/06 - 01:27AM Title: Strong Enough to Break

Okay wow!! alot of thing to comment on in this chapter  like  adam---what is going on there?? and who answered the phone and what was she thinking talking to viv that way?? and melinda--- i thought she didnt want viv to have any connection with the boys and now she rehired her on the tour??? crazy!   Wade-- please dont let  viv do anything with him out of anger... let her get attached to one of the dogs or something .....:)  i also want to know where is brittany in this and how she feels about viv being back on tour? and what about vivs friends in L.A. the owners of Barron Duke? how do they feel about losing viv for a while?  dont keep us waiting to long  cause so far i have loved the story line and people.

Author's Response: Jenna, Gold star for you! I\'m glad you have questions and I can supply the answers for some of them but not all. As for the Adam situation, I can\'t say anything about that now but we\'ll hear from him in a later chapter. Same with the girl who answered his phone.

While Melinda didn\'t want Vivian to have anything to do with the guys after the first story, she\'s realized that Vivian is a talented person and she isn\'t giving her full reign with the guys like she used to have. She\'s working with someone else and not really working directly with the guys.

You\'ll have to wait for the next chapter to see if anything happens with her and Wade ;)

As for Britney, how do you know Vivian is staying on tour? *grins*

And we\'ll be seeing Leslie and Ryan very, very soon don\'t worry. All the questions you have will be answered in the next...oh I\'d say two chapters or so. I can already say they\'re both really long and I\'m excited to get them out there (okay, I admit, I\'m already done with Chapters Six and Seven!) but you won\'t have to wait very long! I\'m glad you like the story and the people so far! There\'s still a few characters waiting in the wings to be introduced so it should be fun getting them out there to you guys! Thank you so much for the review and all the questions, I love answering/skirting around them! lol - Amanda


Reviewer: NIkki g. Anonymous Date: 05/29/06 - 12:23AM Title: Strong Enough to Break

Hmmmm, interesting. SHe and J are really close friends now. Adam's business associate has a thing for him. She feels a little neglected. Now the fun has just begun. Please update soon and thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: J&B, Glad someone picked up on the Vivian and J close friendship thing. And believe me...the fun is just warming up. I\'m so excited for this next chapter *dances* An update is coming soon, don\'t worry it\'ll be here before you know it! Thanks so much for the feedback and the read, I appreciate it mucho! -Amanda


Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Date: 05/28/06 - 11:31PM Title: Strong Enough to Break

You know, I like Adam and Vivian together, but now...I'm not sure if I like Adam...or that giggling girl!!! Shit's gonna hit the fan sometime soon, I'm afraid. I can't wait to read about it!! more soon Amanda!!!:)

Author's Response: Sarah, things take off in the next chapter, don\'t worry. Things will be explained and I\'m glad you\'re liking the chapters so far! Thank you for the positive feed back! - Amanda


Reviewer: stacey Anonymous Date: 05/28/06 - 11:01PM Title: Strong Enough to Break

seeeeee... i figured there was something off about adam. lol. i dont like viv's drinking thing. it's beginning to make me extremely nervous for her. i am getting really, really excited. nice woork.

Author's Response: Stacey, You might think there\'s something off with Adam, but is there really? *wiggles eyebrows* And we\'ll see more of Vivian in the next chapter (I would hope lol as the story is centered around her). Things take off in the next chapter, I assure you. Get ready for plot twist!! - Amanda


Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Date: 05/28/06 - 10:52PM Title: Strong Enough to Break

Yet another awesome chapter.  I can't wait for more.  I like how the story is rolling out so far. 

I also wanted to let you know how a lot of us appreciate how quickly you get the chapters out and stay committed.  A lot of authors here start something and never finish or they update like once a month.  I know a lot of people are busy, but you have the committment and drive to finish something you started.  So, I thank you!



Author's Response: *points to review below* Don\'t make me type that all out again Lol!! - Amanda


Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Date: 05/28/06 - 10:52PM Title: Strong Enough to Break

Yet another awesome chapter.  I can't wait for more.  I like how the story is rolling out so far. 

I also wanted to let you know how a lot of us appreciate how quickly you get the chapters out and stay committed.  A lot of authors here start something and never finish or they update like once a month.  I know a lot of people are busy, but you have the committment and drive to finish something you started.  So, I thank you!



Author's Response: Amy, thanks so much! I think this story is turning out much better than Unbreakable but that\'s just me ;) And I totally agree with you about authors who don\'t finish their work. My biggest pet peeve is reading an awesome story and then all of a sudden the updates stop coming. And, worst of all, the author gives no explanation as to what has happened! I hate it when that happend. So it really isn\'t a problem getting these chapters out! The story is just flying out of my fingers and onto the computer...I can\'t be stopped! So a big you\'re very welcome to you and thanks for the review! - Amanda


Reviewer: Violeta Anonymous Date: 05/28/06 - 10:47PM Title: Strong Enough to Break

I am truly concerned about Vivian. I'm no expert but I'd say she has a drinking problem...

Author's Response: Violeta, you\'ll just have to wait and see what\'s in store for Vivian. Things really get rolling in the next chapter and I can\'t wait to post it! But a couple more days (I\'d say Tuesday or Wednesday) and it\'ll be ready to go! Thanks for the feedback m\'dear! Always appreciated - Amanda


Reviewer: meaghan Anonymous Date: 05/28/06 - 01:24PM Title: Back to the Middle

ok, more please


Author's Response: More is up, meaghan! Thanks so much for the review :) - Amanda


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 05/27/06 - 09:47PM Title: Back to the Middle

AWWW!!! THIS WAS AWESOME!!! FINALLY ON SPEAKING TERMS NOW WHEN DOES ALL HELL BREAK LOSE??? CAUSE I NO THAT SOME SHIT IS GOING TO HAVE TO HAPPEN!!! AND WHEN IT DOES I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO READING IT!!! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE SO I HOPE ITS ASAP!!! LOL


Author's Response: Vegas Chick, some \'shit\' might start to happen ;) You\'ll just have to stay tuned and wait for the next few chapters to drop! Thank you so much for the review and the continued support! I\'m glad you\'re liking it so much :) - Amanda





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