Reviews For Unspeakable
Reviewer: Amy A Anonymous Date: 06/29/06 - 07:29AM Title: The Last Time

I meant to say great ending, lol. I really love this series/story.


Reviewer: Nikki G. Anonymous Date: 06/29/06 - 07:28AM Title: Closing Remarks

Awwww shucks. Anyways, I agree cause I love the DD story and don't quite want to be drawn in to the drama, as u say, of those two. Just don't wait too long. Looking forward to more. Thanks for a great series so far. J&B!


Reviewer: Amy A Anonymous Date: 06/29/06 - 07:27AM Title: The Last Time

I just read the last 2 chapters and i'm so sad that it has come to an end. i can't believe Adam cared so much about his career and even told Erica about Vivians problems he is such a bastard and i'm glad Vivian heard everything. The last chapter was absolutely beautiful, except for Vivian's close call relapse, i was smiling all the way and loved it. Her and Justins are so great together. I'm also glad she realised she had to sort out her issues too otherwise they'd always shadow the relationship. That was a great update Amanda! xxx


Reviewer: Barb Anonymous Date: 06/29/06 - 02:22AM Title: Closing Remarks

You are VERY much welcome!!!  I can't wait to read Unstoppable lol however, I loved the ending of Unspeakable, well, except for the fact that she got her heart sudo-broken by that scumbag Adam...I hope in Unstoppable he loses his ass in the quest for the White House!


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/29/06 - 01:54AM Title: Closing Remarks

Girl you are very welcome!!! An thank you for helping me, get inspiration to rewrite Still On My Brain!! :-D can't wait for more drama!


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/29/06 - 01:49AM Title: The Last Time

oh... how cute!!! i loved it... an you had me scared that they wouldn't end up together girl!!! not cool!! but it was an awesome ending!! i loved it an can't wait till the next story!!


Reviewer: sugarsweet323 Signed Date: 06/27/06 - 03:10AM Title: Slow Learner

no vivian don't go and do something stupid now.  man i hope she'll be alright.  i just wish that she would have found out that adam was the wrong guy for her some other way but of course it could have been worse.  anyway i love the story and i can't wait to read more.  keep it coming.

Author's Response: Definitely could have been worse. She could have walked in on Erica and Adam doing something much worse than talking ;) Just remember that! I\'m so glad you like the story and the last chpater is up! Hope you enjoy it and thanks for reading - Amanda


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 06/26/06 - 02:45PM Title: Slow Learner

OMG!! ADAM HAS JUST KILLED VIVIAM!!! I WILL CUT THE FUCKERS BALLS OFF IF HE WERE REAL THAT FUCKING BASTERD AND I WOULD HAVE BITCH SLAPPED THAT BITCH!!! THEN TORE SOME HAIR OUT BEFORE SHE COULD GO ANY WHERE...POOR GIRL!!! MAN THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD CHAPTER!! I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!!!

Author's Response: Breathe lady, breathe! I promise everything is going to settle itself in the next chapter, for better or worse. Thank you so much for the feedback and the reviews as well! Your enthuiasm knows no bounds lol! Update coming soon - Amanda


Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Date: 06/26/06 - 11:19AM Title: Slow Learner

AHHH Crap!

Adam is suck a dick, dude!! I really, really, really don't like him or Erica! GRRRR...I hope Vivian thinks twice before she starts hittin the vodka bottle. She needs to call Leslie and go find the guys, talk to Justin and everything will be okay! I hope...

More soon, please!



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback Sarah and I\'m glad you liked the chapter. Yup, Adam is an ass and a douche and all the things in between as is Erica. You\'ll find out what happens to Vivian in the last chapter :) Thanks again for the review my dear! - Amanda


Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Date: 06/25/06 - 09:16PM Title: Slow Learner

YAY! Now she is free to be with Justin!!  This was a great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Leanne! I\'m glad you liked the chapter and thanks again for the reviews and the feedback! Last chapter is coming soon and I hope you enjoy it :) - Amanda





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