Reviewer: greg
Anonymous
Date: 08/31/06 - 12:09PM
Title: Mr. Blue Sky
GREAT LONG STORY FOR FIRST TRY LOVE THIS STORY IT IS REALLY WELL WRITTEN AND PUT TOGETHER
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much! :)
Reviewer: Amber
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/06 - 04:02PM
Title: We'll search for tomorrow on every shore
It's a good beginning. I like it. You're description of the story should have the date in it, that way you didn't have to have 1901 as part of the dialogue. Other than that, good start.
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the construcitve criticism. :) Good to know while I continue writing the story.
