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Reviewer: Dolphin_Lover
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Date: 08/29/06 - 06:26PM
Title: Stove Fire
WOW! Is all that I can say. I hope that she realises(sp?) that she really is in love with him. Since we already know that he loves her. Well as always great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: CoachTiffany
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Date: 08/22/06 - 01:50AM
Title: Whole New World
I think they know a lot more about each other than they think...and I also think there needs to be a little sober hooking up sometime in the near future too LOL they obviously want each other so one of them needs to just get the balls up and go for it!
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 08/21/06 - 11:38AM
Title: Whole New World
Damn, now that was intense.. the whole cow tipping was fuckin halarious girl!! i loved it.. An damn things are gettin interesting in Lauren and justin land!! woot woot hopefully justin will wake up an quit being an ass to her.. an maybe just maybe they can get together! :-D update soon.
Reviewer: Lynn
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Date: 08/21/06 - 11:04AM
Title: Whole New World
OMG you made me think of a scene in the movie Cars. Brilliant. I loved it!!
Reviewer: Dolphin_Lover
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Date: 08/20/06 - 06:02PM
Title: Whole New World
Oh great chapter. I wish that Justin would tell her that she kissed him when she was drunk. I can't wait for him to tell her that he's falling in LOVE with her.
Reviewer: TiiNyDaNcer xX
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Date: 08/20/06 - 04:36PM
Title: Whole New World
I absolutely LOVE this story. The cowtipping scene was hilarious, and I love the banter haha, it's cute. I liked the "Justin playing with the kids" scene particularly -- but yes, I'm not going to tell you individually what I liked, but I LIKE IT ALL! IT'S GOOD! UPDATE AGAIN, k bye. :) hahahah
Reviewer: vessy
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Date: 08/20/06 - 12:26PM
Title: Whole New World
great work! can't wait for more
Reviewer: alimera
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Date: 08/20/06 - 09:32AM
Title: Whole New World
that cowtipping part reminded me of the scene in "cars" and i think i laughed harder than was necessary! i like where this is going...maybe justin will do something nice for lauren's birthday! can't wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
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Date: 08/20/06 - 05:01AM
Title: Whole New World
awwwwwwwwwwww that was a nice talk. They do know each other (somewhat) but it seems like they know each other's weaknesses more than anything. And I can't believe he didn't know her birthday. Even my boss new my birthday and he was the ass of all asses.lol. Great update girl.
Reviewer: Gigi
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Date: 08/20/06 - 04:56AM
Title: Whole New World
OMG!!!! That was so funny! Justin Timberlake cowtipping. Whew! But poor Justin he'll never be more than a boss to her. Or will he?
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