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Reviewer: Dolphin_Lover
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Date: 10/10/06 - 01:20AM
Title: All Falls Down
NO!!!!!! He can't let her go. She can't let him go. She loves him. Let her still be at the hotel when he gets there, or have JC talk to Lauren about all it. Don't let him give up on them being an 'us'. As always update when you can. But I do hope that it is really soon. I love it.
Reviewer: Lynn
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Date: 10/06/06 - 02:03PM
Title: All Falls Down
Aww, poor babies! I feel bad for both of them. Can't wait till the next one!
Reviewer: alimera
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Date: 10/06/06 - 10:59AM
Title: All Falls Down
omfg. you go from totally perfect to totally SCREWED UP in one update! damn you! again, fix this! this is not how it's supposed to be! lol, please update again soon...i wanna see them together! :):)
Reviewer: bebeboo
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Date: 10/06/06 - 10:17AM
Title: All Falls Down
awe....NOOO...they can't end like that. amazing story. love it. please update sooon. thanks. <3
Reviewer: Sondra
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/06 - 04:01AM
Title: All Falls Down
Girrrl, you know you know how to put some intensity in this story. That was excellent! I love Lauren, but sometimes she can be a real bitch lmao. I wonder what her problem is! I know that as long as she's been working for Jusin and she knows he was a big ass prick, but after that date and their love making session, how could you deny what he feels for you is real! He had tears in his eyes for goodness sake when he professed his love for you! I just wanna knock some sense into that ho sometimes, I swear lmao. And if she goes that crazy when Justin makes her mad before they date, I'd like to see how she would react when they got into a fight while they were dating! And that scene when she got into the cab, *sobs* priceless. Geez, I hope she comes to tell him that she's in love with him too. I mean, I'd go nuts too if I knew I were in love with an asswipe, but come on...give him break. Would he have changed his attitude this much if what he feels isn't real? Use some SENSE Lauren! Anyway, great chapter and I can't WAIT for more!
Reviewer: Lauren
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/06 - 12:45AM
Title: All Falls Down
oh my goodnes.. when everthing we going so well. there goes a twist!! i'm loving it! please update!!
Reviewer: Joanna
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/06 - 12:42AM
Title: All Falls Down
WHAT AN ENDING?? i can't wait til the next one...wow!! great chapter! don't leave us in suspense for too long.
Reviewer: chelsia
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Date: 10/05/06 - 11:36PM
Title: All Falls Down
Noooo...you can't do this to us! How mean are you leaving us hanging like this...update soon! :)
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/06 - 11:06PM
Title: All Falls Down
Wow... that was seriously way too heartless of Lauren man. What is wrong with her? I know it's hard to believe but why would she laugh in his face? Poor Justin. I really hope they work things out. Great update gal.
Reviewer: angel_from_africa
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/06 - 10:18PM
Title: All Falls Down
I can't beleive it!! He was this close!!! Lauren needs sense knocked into her!!! Argh!! Good job though i loved it!!! By the way congrats on your award at silent tragedy!!
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