Reviewer: elly
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/06 - 05:50PM
Title: Chapter 10
omg. that was so shocking. good, but shocking!
Author's Response: glad you liked it.. i wanted this chapter to be shocking.. im working on chapter eleven as we speak..
Reviewer: grishy
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/06 - 04:31PM
Title: Chapter 10
The right dosis of drama and suspence, JC suffering (I know is bad). More of that will be great. Something I wanna know is about this Jake guy, what he want from JC?
Author's Response: glad you liked it.. i dunno about Jake, he was just a character i put in without htinking now i have to figure out what his role is.. good question though.. i'll try and figure it out and maybe add him in the next chapter..