Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/21/06 - 12:15PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow that is good.. i gotta say i had a few good laughs in this one. Justin & Kal are just wow.. I dont know how to explain it. The hostility is wow just wow.. lol i've said that already huh? well since i can't think of anything useful i'll just put! THE CHAPTER ROCKED! update soon! :-P

-Ambs


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 06/21/06 - 01:21AM Title: Chapter 4

"On second thought, maybe you should wear the flats."

OMG LMAO.

 

BEST. LINE. EVER!

 

rofl 


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 06/21/06 - 01:20AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my god, I don't even know where to begin with this chapter! I don't know why you didn't like this one--it was the shit. It cracked me up all the way through. Poor Trace, that boy is such a sweetheart. Justin is such a cocky bastard. A lot of people like to be Trace's friend so they can find stuff out about me..uhuh, of course it's true Justin, but do you have to SAY it? Lmao. And him trying to smoke on Trace's cigarettes--what a loser. And don't even get me started on his cheap ass ordering a coke. That was just FOUL. Haha, on the other hand, Kal is hiarlious. I love her. She's such a bitch-but still so great. Hmm--JT and her ordering the same food? What does this all mean? Yeah, you know they gonna fuck Dev. HAHHAHAH. Update again bitch.


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 06/20/06 - 11:17AM Title: Chapter 3

Ut-oh Kal agreed to to go on the date! lmao. This should be quite an interresting time. I can see her and JT getting into a crazy argument over something stupid, like a spilled drink or something. Rofl. Anyways, I freakin' love Trace in this story. He's so cute...the little loser. “Jessica, why did you do that to Will? He loved you; he would’ve done anything for you! You wretched bitch!” Omg...rofl, wtf was that shit Dev? ROFL. What a beautiful soap opera. Gotta love them. Justin is so stupid, MR. I'm not gonna fall in love again. We all know he will...and who will it be with? Aimee, or Kal? Dun DUn DUNNNNNNNN. Update soon. The story is going great Dev, it's very entertaining and well-written. Love ya bitch!


Author's Response: Um, first and foremost we do NOT compliment Trace whatsoever ...EVER do you understand me? Secondly ...we do not LOVE Trace ever? DO YOU GET ME?! Hey, Justin isn\'t stupid ...I mean, he is ..but we all have our ways of not getting hurt ...HAVE A LITTLE HEART ..and just because you assume it\'s going to be Kaleigh he falls in love with me ..I might just not make it that way. HA! Love you anyway, and I ADORE your compliments. Even if they are lies.


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 06/20/06 - 11:05AM Title: Chapter 2

Dev, I agree, thanks for the speedy update...only you're not keeping that little thing up, now are ya bitch? ROFL. Secondly, I know this doesn't pertain to your story, but I can't believe you wouldn't do the f-ing survey...you loser. Now, speaking of losers...rofl, Justin is such a pansy. He totally fell for the 'trap a guy into doing something he doesn't want to do if he can get some ass' scheme us women like to pull. What a little moron...mwuaha. Aimee and Justin are sort of cute together, but I can't like them all that much since I know you are going to ruin their relationship with a freakin' LOVE TRIANGLE. Evil bitch. LOL. Onto next chapter...


Author's Response: Well, i\'d say thanks for a speedy review ..but I can\'t NOW CAN I!? ...wtf @ that survey Jessica ..you didn\'t give me the fucking link to it? YOU MORON. And you don\'t know wtf is going to happen ..so stop being a fag and like Aimee and Justin together for the time being!


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/16/06 - 10:57AM Title: Chapter 3

That as good.. an Kal is so funny the whole wallet thing, that girl is nuts.. lol an trace poor guy, i like how you have portrayed him, instead of the bad ass everyone makes him out to be. Update soon k! great chapter



Author's Response: Once again if you think Kaleigh is funny, that must mean that\'s a compliment to me as well. Justin ..can be sweet ...so i\'m trying to make him out to be sweet in this one ..we\'ll see.


Reviewer: Sondra Anonymous Date: 06/16/06 - 06:04AM Title: Chapter 2

Girrrl, you're on the ball! Thanks for giving us such a quick update! I must say, I love Justin and Aimee. So CUTE! And I love how great of friends Kaleigh and Aimee are and it means the world to her that Justin and her get along. I don't see why Justin's charm isn't working on her! Is she like, immune to nice people or what? lmao. I loved it! Don't keep us waiting for more!

Author's Response: You\'re welcome! I\'m glad you think Aimee and Justin are cute. I\'ve been getting that a lot and that\'s great. Kaleigh and Aimee are sisters at heart. You just gotta love \'em together. Kaleigh\'s just a hard person to get along with.


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/15/06 - 07:08PM Title: Chapter 2

lmao! I love JUSTIN! he's so bad in this.. damn, awesome update hun!! Kal is so cool i love her.. an poor justin she's immune to the charm.. poor poor baby.. lol Aimee and justin are so cute together i love em! great job.. i can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you think that Kal is cool, because if Kaleigh is kewl, then I am. I\'m glad you like Aimee and Justin as a couple ...thank you for the compliments!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you think that Kal is cool, because if Kaleigh is kewl, then I am. I\'m glad you like Aimee and Justin as a couple ...thank you for the compliments!


Reviewer: Sondra Anonymous Date: 06/13/06 - 11:07PM Title: Chapter 1

Wowww, that was an amazing first chapter! I'm so glad that I stumbled upon it! This is definitely a unique twist in fan fiction, and I can't WAIT til you update! Please don't leave me hanging for a long time with the next chapter because I'm getting obsessed and anxious to see what's gonna happen next! It's already sexual tension between those two. And I also like their characters lmao. Good job and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, darling! I\'m glad that you\'re enjoying it ..and getting some fun out of reading it. Unique? I didn\'t think that at all ..I\'ve already got another chapter done ..so i\'ll update in a few. I\'m glad you\'re anxious for it ..and again thank you for the compliments! You are too kind.


Reviewer: jrtluva05 Signed Date: 06/13/06 - 10:55PM Title: Chapter 1

omg.. wow that was amazing for a first chapter im already hooked!! dude i woulda crawled up in a whole an died if that happened to me.. an especially if cursed out JT.. damn but then again i'd be jealous that my best friend is dating him. lol well can't wait for more!

Author's Response: She just had a bad day, maybe her feelings and attitude will change later on. Justin didn\'t deserve it, however ...speeding is what got his ass in this situation in the first place. Glad you like it ...and thank you for the compliments! It means a lot.





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