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Reviewer: Deena
Anonymous
Date: 07/26/06 - 03:19PM
Title: First/Last
Fabulous!
Reviewer: Sondra
Anonymous
Date: 07/02/06 - 03:59AM
Title: First/Last
*cries* gosh, I don't know if I wanna have kids now! That was brilliant and I love the way it was written. I love how you captured the characters emotions and with Ty crying as if it were his plea of getting his father to stay. That was heartbreaking and yet uplifting at the same time. You think that everything is perfect from the outside but having a famous husband or wife that always has to be away is an even tougher battle. It sucks that your job has to be put before your family. I loved the song choice and the dialogue. One of the best short stories you've written in my opinion. Damn you for being such a talented writer! lmao. Now hurry up and update Joyride or I'm coming to ATL and hunting your ass down! lmao. Love you to pieces *smiles*Beautiful job!
Reviewer: Sassy Spacey
Signed
Date: 06/29/06 - 05:54PM
Title: First/Last
I liked that alot. I LOVE the song, and was thinking about making a SS to it as well. But I think you did a better job then I ever could have. Anyway, it was awesome great job :)
-Traci
Reviewer: Jordin
Anonymous
Date: 06/29/06 - 04:56PM
Title: First/Last
Oh, woe is me. I know how she feels. Or maybe more appropriately I should say I know how I feel huh? Yep, you think you know but you have no idea how much of a prison life is when you're in love alone. I loved it girl. I feel sorry for Justin's future ex-wife. *Sigh* LOL.
Reviewer: B
Anonymous
Date: 06/29/06 - 01:15AM
Title: First/Last
that was incredible girl... I'd hate to feel that way but i can imagine how it must be to be in that position. great work
Reviewer: vessy
Signed
Date: 06/28/06 - 06:48PM
Title: First/Last
beatiful
Reviewer: Angel
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/06 - 06:13PM
Title: First/Last
I love love loved It! <3
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 06/28/06 - 05:52PM
Title: First/Last
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. you're fucking with my heart. i nearly cried when i first heard that song and saw the vid, and now this. ugh, you know i'm a sappy bum and you write this! WHY??? lmao. so sad. so tragic. so damn tearjerky (okay, not a word, but whatever, lol). i loved it. =[=
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/06 - 05:38PM
Title: First/Last
Dude, that must be a terrible situation for a woman to be in; I don't know if I could handle it, I'd break down too easily. Great story as per usual Ms. Jordan.
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