Reviews For Breathless
Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 07/12/06 - 03:07AM Title: Chapter 8

OMG!!! THAT WAS JUST WRONG! SHIT I WOULD NEVER HAVE DONE THAT....HELL I SAW JUSTIN IN CONCERT ON MONDAY IN GERMANY AND I COULDNT GET ENOUGH OF HIM! THERE MUST BE SOMETHING REALLY WRONG WITH THE CHICK THEN!!! LOL


Reviewer: Gigi Signed Date: 07/12/06 - 01:16AM Title: Chapter 8

I want to beat her for doing that!


Reviewer: Gigi Signed Date: 07/11/06 - 08:03PM Title: Chapter 7

Justin is about to feel like a real idiot.

Author's Response:

Oh yes, yes he is...

 

and this comment just made me smile :)


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 07/11/06 - 06:26PM Title: Chapter 7

This is a great story so far. I love your descriptions of Jamie and Justin. Keep up the awesome work!


Reviewer: SilentlyCharming Signed Date: 07/06/06 - 09:20PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh! and one more thing. To know that you were only 15 or so when writing this story makes me that more impressed. (and now i can look past some of the mispelled words :) lol

Author's Response: thanks :) and I do try and proof read the chapters.....but I think that since I already know what it should say, I miss things.  But I do promise to try harder to catch those misspellings :) and thank you for the compliment


Reviewer: SilentlyCharming Signed Date: 07/06/06 - 09:16PM Title: Chapter 1

I think your imagery is really good. I like how you describe the feelings/emotions of the characters and how you describe the situations. I look forward to reading more...


Reviewer: Joanna Anonymous Date: 07/05/06 - 06:13PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm loving this story so far...can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) It really means a lot that people enjoy my writing, Hopefully I\'ll have time to post a couple more chapters tomorrow :)


Reviewer: Wicca Anonymous Date: 07/03/06 - 12:45PM Title: Chapter 1

not trying to be offending or anything but didnt jamie really know Justin or chris?hadnt she ever heard of nsync before?it's kinda unbelievable because she loves singing and music therefore she has to know afew famous popstars.if u knew what I mean!

Author's Response: Know where you\'re coming from, and it will get explained later on in the story. ....and you have to keep in mind that I was 15 or 16 when I wrote this one, so it might be slightly cheesy :)


Reviewer: Gigi Signed Date: 07/03/06 - 12:08AM Title: Chapter 4

I really like the way Jamie is starting to open up.


Reviewer: smee01 Signed Date: 07/02/06 - 11:38PM Title: Chapter 4

Awesome story so far.  I can't wait until more is posted.





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