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Reviewer: JoJo
Signed
Date: 02/28/07 - 01:56AM
Title: Chapter 9
justin's mom was horrible...it's a nice change i like it. can't wait for more!
see i knew i loved this story! his mom is awful and i love that you made her that way, but they are all right, he can't fix her. she has to do that....amazing love it!
Reviewer: vessy
Signed
Date: 02/16/07 - 01:44PM
Title: Chapter 8
can't wait for more
Author's Response: it\'s coming... i\'m working on it!!
i have to say that i think this is pretty great. different and honest. keep it up girl. i can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: thank you so much!! i really appriciate it and i\'m glad you like it so much. i\'m working on a new chapter so it should be up in the next few days. let me know if you have any ideas or suggestions that you would like to see.
Reviewer: Kelly
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/06 - 12:01AM
Title: Chapter 6
story is good so far update soon!
Reviewer: maureen
Anonymous
Date: 09/17/06 - 10:49AM
Title: Chapter 5
just for future reference Jeter plays for rthe NY Yankees not the dodgers or the Red Soxs
Author's Response: oh damn! i had yankees up there then in review changed it to the sox... i\'m gonna go change that thanks
Reviewer: kahlymilla
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Date: 09/02/06 - 12:07AM
Title: Chapter 4
Hey, I was searching through my favorites of the story Sexual Suicide, deciding to read some stories of those who like my story. You know, return the favor. Anyway, here's my review on what I read: First, I like how the characters are portrayed, especially the main. I have a clear of who they are. However, some of the supporting characters come out of nowhere. Still, since they are famous and have established personalities it wasn't a major problem. Next, Lola and Justin. I understand how they met, but I kinda wanted to see conversation between them. However, if they lacked conversation because they were both too high, then nevermind, lol. In that case, I totally understand your direction. Everything else is cool though. I want to see where their relationship goes from here? Will they only be together at Ashton's drunken parties? Will they always be high? lol. Oh I just need to point out that Lindsay bugs me in this, she comes off as accusatory. Calling Justin an asshole? Come on girl know your place and get back to it. LMAO. This is a lengthy review, but i didn't mine giving you some feedback Author's Response: thanks so much for your feedback hun!! i just moved to nyc so updates are coming soon. i have sooo many things running through my head i just have to find the spare time to write them down. haha i know you know something about that!! all the things you talk about are def coming up, but again i just have to find a spare minute.
Reviewer: sam
Anonymous
Date: 07/31/06 - 12:05PM
Title: Chapter 2
thank god you updated...i love this sory
Author's Response: thanks for your 2 reviews on chapter 1 and 2... hope you like 3 and 4!!!
Reviewer: CoachTiffany
Signed
Date: 07/31/06 - 12:09AM
Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story...its different from others that I've read in the past...can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: just saw the little respond button at the button of the reviews...
thanks sooo much. i tried to make a story that wasn\'t the typical perfect girl meets perfect guy story!
Reviewer: sam
Anonymous
Date: 07/28/06 - 05:33PM
Title: Chapter 1
i really like it...its different and new...update soon :-)
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