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Reviewer: grishy
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/06 - 11:49PM
Title: Chapter 2: Taking a Chance
Your perspective is real, the level of description give to the reader an ambient. Author's Response: I hope so. I want to be real and descriptive!
Reviewer: kahlymilla
Signed
Date: 08/10/06 - 06:58PM
Title: Chapter 2: Taking a Chance
I'm sort of with Justin on this one. Something about Laura just rubs me the wrong way. She's just so demanding, pushy, and she jumps to conclusions. How stupid she must've felt when proposed instead breaking up with her like she thought. And it seem that JC was having second thoughts after he proposed. Is there no hope for this couple? Wow, Justin seems to have serious anxiety issues. He bought to have a breakdown on the grass. And Oh god, did somebody just kidnap him? I wonder especially what JC's gonna do. Author's Response: I really like your comments. I don't know if there's hope for JC and Laura. I guess we'll have to see! And Justin is a very interesting case. Thanks for the thoughts!
Reviewer: kahlymilla
Signed
Date: 08/10/06 - 06:47PM
Title: Chapter 1: The Big Announcement
Hmm, that was definitely intense especially in Justin's case. Everyone shrugged, it off but not Justin. He all but wanted to punch JC. And that I'll never forgive you bit was harsh. Why isn't happy for his friend? JC's fallen in love, congratulations should be in order. But no, Justin's only being selfish. How old is he in this particular story, I missed it, if you mentioned it. Cause in my opinion, he's a bit childish. Maybe something happened in his past that makes him worry that he's going to lose his bestfriend. I'm on to the next chapter. Author's Response: The story takes place in 2001, so Justin is 20. I think he does act childish. In my mind, Justin is as immature as he is mature, if that makes any sense. It probably doesn't. I love your comments. Thanks!
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 08/10/06 - 12:16PM
Title: Chapter 2: Taking a Chance
holy shit!! that was freakin intense... i really love how you have started this story i like it alot.. an damn i wanna find out wht happens to justin.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you sort of find out in the next chapter. I'm glad you like it so far!
Reviewer: Kayla
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/06 - 01:58AM
Title: Chapter 2: Taking a Chance
cant wait to see how this turns out... update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are interested and reading. That's the best! Hopefully you like what you read next and stick with me. Thanks!
Reviewer: Tricky_Chicky
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Date: 08/10/06 - 12:56AM
Title: Chapter 2: Taking a Chance
great start, I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for that! I'm trying to put up more so see how you like it!
Reviewer: grishy
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/06 - 11:03PM
Title: Chapter 1: The Big Announcement
Good twist, I couldn't imagine the news to the last very moment.
Author's Response: Cool. I wanted to build the tension up in that first chapter. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Kim
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/06 - 12:00AM
Title: Chapter 1: The Big Announcement
I'm hooked already. I'd like more please. LOL
Author's Response: You were my first comment! That means a lot to me. I hope you like the rest so far. I'd like to see what you think. Thanks so much!
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