Reviewer: kahlymilla
Signed
Date: 08/10/06 - 06:47PM
Title: Chapter 1: The Big Announcement
Hmm, that was definitely intense especially in Justin's case. Everyone shrugged, it off but not Justin. He all but wanted to punch JC. And that I'll never forgive you bit was harsh. Why isn't happy for his friend? JC's fallen in love, congratulations should be in order. But no, Justin's only being selfish. How old is he in this particular story, I missed it, if you mentioned it. Cause in my opinion, he's a bit childish. Maybe something happened in his past that makes him worry that he's going to lose his bestfriend.
I'm on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: The story takes place in 2001, so Justin is 20. I think he does act childish. In my mind, Justin is as immature as he is mature, if that makes any sense. It probably doesn't. I love your comments. Thanks!
Reviewer: grishy
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/06 - 11:03PM
Title: Chapter 1: The Big Announcement
Good twist, I couldn't imagine the news to the last very moment.
Author's Response: Cool. I wanted to build the tension up in that first chapter. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Kim
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/06 - 12:00AM
Title: Chapter 1: The Big Announcement
I'm hooked already. I'd like more please. LOL
Author's Response: You were my first comment! That means a lot to me. I hope you like the rest so far. I'd like to see what you think. Thanks so much!
