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Reviewer: amk16
Signed
Date: 01/15/07 - 12:27PM
Title: Pot leaves
I loved this heartbraking story. I didn't think I would at first, just because of the title, but it was wonderful. I liked your use of flashback and the the one liner at the end that brought it all together. great job.
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/23/06 - 05:47PM
Title: Pot leaves
Helena. my love, the thing I adore about you is that there's no way in hell I'm finding anything even remotely similar to your stuff anywhere else. You're one of the most oiriginal people around, I just want to make sure you're aware of that! Anyway, this was incredibly well done - very emotional, very subtly played, two thumbs way way up
Reviewer: Joeylance
Anonymous
Date: 08/23/06 - 04:04PM
Title: Pot leaves
WOW!! That blew me away. No pun intended. Excellent - short yet extremely powerful!!
Reviewer: Kijuana
Anonymous
Date: 08/23/06 - 03:45PM
Title: Pot leaves
Girl, this story is so good...really sad but really, really good. Great read, Ki
Reviewer: Christina
Anonymous
Date: 08/23/06 - 02:37PM
Title: Pot leaves
In all honesty this one blew me away Helena. I didn't know quite what to make of the title, and then as soon as my eyes landed on "illegal drug" I thought where on earth is she taking this? Who has corrupted Helena to write such about things?! But then the story progressed into something very deep and very moving, I got so into it I'd almost forgotten all about the weird couple-bonding-over-drugs thing as I read about them losing a child. Of course, in the end, it all made perfect sense. Sorry to ramble, but this was truly fantastic!
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