Reviews For Green eyed monster
Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 02/18/07 - 05:20PM Title: Blue Christmas

Ok where is my next chapter?? I have been waiting forever and now I really want to know what is going to happen...you left it at such a good part...whats going to happen..I hope you whip her memory...that way she can start fresh with Justin and not have Jc in the mind all the time!

 

Tina 



Author's Response: Ack I'm really really sorry, but I've been having computer problems (computer crashing, etc.) So until then, I won't be able to update...SO SORRY! As soon as I get my computer running again, I'll update ASAP


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 02/04/07 - 04:53PM Title: Blue Christmas

I LOVED IT!!! YOU KNOW I DID!! LOL .... BUT POOR BROOKE!!! I HONESTLY FEEL SO BAD FOR HER!! I KNOW HOW IT IS TO BE IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE AND THEM NOT FEELING THE SAME AND BOY DOES IT HURT!! BUT YOU GOT TO MOVE ON!! WHEN WILL SHE GET HER SHIT TOGETHER AND MOVE ON....OR BETTER YET HAVE SOMETHING REALLY DRAMATIC HAPPEN AND HAVE JUSTIN COME TO HER RESUCE!!! LIKE IF SHE WAS ATTACKED OR SOMETHING! HOW ABOUT THIS ITS KIND OF HARD BUT I THINK IT WOULD FIT IN YOUR STORY...SHE IS FOUND IN A PARK AND REALLY BEATEN UP AND POSSIBLY RAPED..BUT SHE FOUGHT AND WON! BUT SHE IS IN A COMA AND JUSTIN IS THERE WITH HER AND JC TO HAVE HIM FEELING BAD ABOUT HOW THINGS WENT THE LAST TIME THEY TALKED AND OH WHEN SHE FINALLY DOES WAKE UP SHE DOESN'T KNOW ANYONE IN THE ROOM THAT WAY IT GIVES HER A CHANCE TO FALL FOR JUSTIN!!!! I THINK THAT WOULD BE REALLY COOL TO READ!!!! HOPE YOU LIKE THE IDEA!!

 

TINA 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes I do have something tragic in mind, (Maybe not as bad though) that may bring Justin closer to her.

 That's all I gotta say about that. ;)


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 01/24/07 - 03:17PM Title: After the show (is the after party)

Well, I am so happy that I could help...I look forward to the new chapter and you know I just think the story rocks!! Its really cool....I can never get enough! 


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 01/24/07 - 08:37AM Title: After the show (is the after party)

Awww thank you so much for the sweet  message! I know when a story is good! and I really love this one! I don't want  you to stop writing tell its complete. I know you can do that, you have writing skills in your hands....now this chapter was really good and awww I feel so bad for brook!! The food fight was a good one...maybe I will do it when I get married too..lol...well I can't wait to read your next new ideas for this story! though if you update this weekend you will have to wait tell Monday for a review...I am in England tell then.....

 

Tina 



Author's Response: No, THANK YOU TINA! You're completly welcome, you deserve it, girl! And if I do have a chance to update, I'll be looking forward for  your review on Monday.


Reviewer: Aviana Signed Date: 01/24/07 - 01:05AM Title: After the show (is the after party)

This is a good story! A fun read. I like Brooke's narration and spunky attitude. Keep it up!


Author's Response:

Thanks! I like spunky people, and I can't stand when people make their characters so perfect. Thanks for readin' and reviewin!


Reviewer: Skitzo Signed Date: 01/23/07 - 10:54PM Title: After the show (is the after party)

AH! I LOVE IT!!!



Author's Response: Aw thanks!


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 01/14/07 - 04:54PM Title: Here comes the bride...

Awww I feel so bad for Brook!! But boy was this really good!!! I was wondering why there hadn't been a new update in a while...now I know...sorry Its taken me so long to read it...but I never got the little notice saying one of my favorite storys was updated...but thats ok...I hope that you haven't quit writing this story!!!I love it to muich and I want to know what is going to happen next....What is Justin going to do to help her get over the crying....Please update soon!!!!

 

Tina



Author's Response:

Oh I'm still working on it, don't worry!

And I'll be updating ASAP..just been having problems with my computer...

As for what will happen with Justin...

Well.

That you'll have to find out later ;)


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 12/07/06 - 06:58PM Title: Change of heart...?

HECK YEAH I DO!! I THINK THAT IS REALLY SAD!! BUT HAVE IF THEY GOT THE CONFIDENCE TO WALK OUT OF THE HOUSE LIKE THAT MORE POWER TO THEM! LOL.....I AM ALSO GLAD THAT BROOK IS STARTING TO LIKE HER FINALLY!! AND I AM SO EXCITE TO READ WHAT CRAZY THING IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT! LOL

TINA


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 12/06/06 - 06:45PM Title: Change of heart...?

AWWW SHE IS TURNING INTO A GOOD PERSON!!!! I AM SO PROUD OF HER!!! THAT IS JUST WONDERFUL! LOL THAT WAS FUNNY SHE RIPPED OUT THE WOMENS WEAVE...LOL....LOL...THAT WAS GREAT!!! IF THE WOMEN WAS FAT WHY DIDNT WE LET HER KNOW THAT THE DRESS WOULDNT FIT HER IN THE FIRST PLACE??? SO JUST WONDERING...ANYWHO..LOVED IT LOVED IT AND OH YEAH LOVED IT!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!

TINA

Author's Response:

She was in denial.. she thought she could fit the dress when she would really just rip in in half..lol. You know what I'm talking about though, when you see somebody wearing clothes that are like 5 sizes too small...lol


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 11/22/06 - 09:03PM Title: Bastard.

ok i loved it and all...but a custom made dress from france! is so more that $2,000 dallors I know I was there! But other than that! this is a great story and I really love how its going. But I am really wondering what is Justin up to. I am starting to think that made Jc had a little something something to do with Justin going oafter Brooke. But I love how you have him to be a jackass most of the time. I can't wait for the next chapter to know what will happen. The maid of honor...lol...that was great. Justin trying not to laugh lol...love your humour! dont take to long updating the story!

 

Tina 





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