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Reviewer: Melanie
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/04 - 02:35PM
Title: Chapter 6
That was the end?! It was cute though.
Reviewer: aimee
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/04 - 03:44AM
Title: Chapter 6
the end? you're kidding right? no mas?
Reviewer: Aysia
Anonymous
Date: 04/09/04 - 05:48PM
Title: Chapter 5
Nice update. More soon!
Reviewer: shorty06
Signed
Date: 04/09/04 - 02:08PM
Title: Chapter 5
Akk! i love this story. Sorry I didn't comment on every chapter but i decided I would do it when i got done with chapter 5!! I love this story. its great. I haven't read a good story in so long :) :) you have to post more A.S.A.P!!
Reviewer: Diana
Anonymous
Date: 04/09/04 - 01:34PM
Title: Chapter 5
great story so far. cant wait for more
Reviewer: Crissy
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/04 - 08:16PM
Title: Chapter 4
omg! u so need to finish the next chapter because this story is really good. you have a talent for writing. keep it up.
Reviewer: Aysia
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/04 - 05:19PM
Title: Chapter 4
OMG! My stomach actually dropped when Lucy walked in on their first endeavor! That was great writing. Keep it up!
Reviewer: Aysia
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/04 - 04:43PM
Title: Chapter 1
This sounds very interesting. I like the tension building with Kelly thinking that her mother is going after a younger man. Awesome.
Reviewer: Mandie
Anonymous
Date: 04/07/04 - 06:06PM
Title: Chapter 4
Omg girl was story is so awesome and so real....Keep up the good work cuz i cant wait to see what happenss next!
hey girlie, just wanted to say the ending of chapter 4 was a total surprise. keep up the great work.
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