Reviewer: Lesli
AnonymousDate: 09/30/06 - 05:51PM
Title: Some Major Denial
I REALLY shouldn't be reading this. I mean you broke my heart on Dirrty Laundry! For some crazy reason I can't stay away! Well, I still love Devin even though I'm still pissed about the abortion thing. I can't help but love the ho. I think I'm kinda like Justin minus the denial. I will say that I do enjoy Justin and Beyonce together...but, for some crazy reason I just don't want him with her. Probably because I've always wanted him with Dev. Ehhh...B's too perfect just like Lynn said. And this Chris character is already getting on my nerves! Why'd she have to marry him? Anyway I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Lesli! Aww, I'm so glad to see you're back. And yes, I know the ending to DL had to have taken its toll on you, because you were one of my favorite Devin lovers. I still love Devin, too, in spite of her mistakes, so we're probably all in denial in some small form. But so what! I enjoy Justin and Beyonce together, so I'm glad you can, too, even if you don't want them together. I mean, she is just a little too perfect for what he's used to, but hey, maybe he'll get there with her. Maybe he won't. I think that's the point of the story, but I haven't quite figured that out yet LOL! Once I do, I hope you're still here! So good to see you again. =D
Reviewer: Joy
AnonymousDate: 09/29/06 - 07:43PM
Title: Some Major Denial
So glad you're doing this story. update again soon
Reviewer: Deena
AnonymousDate: 09/29/06 - 02:03AM
Title: Some Major Denial
That was fabulous! I love the intense scenes, that's what I loved about the first story. the last scene was just great. Fabulous job!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Deena. I love writing the intense scenes... they tend to flow much easier than happy ones lol. Go figure. I'm glad you're enjoying it, so thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Sondra
AnonymousDate: 09/29/06 - 01:39AM
Title: Some Major Denial
Gosh, I'm just loving all the denial in this story. It should've been named Da Nile cause everyone is in a long ass river of LIES! First off, Justin. I love him for now, I really do but gosh, it's written all over his face that he's not over Devin. I love the maturity and I especially love the speech that he gave Chris, they both made each other's lives a living hell so shut up! It's something about that Chris guy that I ain't feelin. I'm sure he's a nice guy and all that mumbo jumbo, but please, at least trust your wife for the first few months! Wait 6, and THEN think that Justin banged her on the car. Asshat. And I feel Beyonce on the Devin thing, you just can't hate her lol. She has that something about her that draws you in. She's like Justin. You have your reasons to dislike her and you just love her all at the same time and you can't figure out why! lol. But I also feel bad for Beyonce cause she knows deep down that Justin still loves Devin. Just say it dammit! DENIAL. Trust me, I know *nods* lol. I thought this was the best chapter so far, not boring at all as you liked to put it lol. Very well written and I can't WAIT for more! hurry pleaseee
Author's Response: Da Nile LMAO. You're so right. Everyone is lying... to themselves, which is worse than lying to anyone else, in my opinion. I'm glad you love Justin, because I know how hard that is, but you're gonna have to give him time to admit that Devin's in his life because he actually wants here there. He doesn't know whether he's mad or happy or hurt or just plain indifferent, even though it's obvious to us. And Chris is so clueless, poor guy. Be honest, though, would YOU trust Devin? LOL. And yes, I know you know what it's like to try and hate a Devin, even if it doesn't completely work out. Of course B knows that he loves Devin, who doesn't know at this point? But since everyone's acting like it's not true, she might as well do it too! Denial all up and through this bitch LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, even if I didn't love it myself. I do love to hear from you, though so thanks, doll!
Reviewer: Jordin
AnonymousDate: 09/29/06 - 01:15AM
Title: Some Major Denial
See! This is exactly why she wasn't supposed to get married! There's excess baggage and excess feeling and excess...stuff. Lots and lots of excess! I'll admit, I liked seeing B and Justin be the cute little rich couple they are, inviting their friends to the Hamptons for the weekend. All I kept thinking through the first half of the chapter was Partna, let me upgrade ya. I'm weird, yes. This I know. I hate that I like them together, just like Beyonce hates that she likes Devin. It's just unavoidable. And then Chris, I don't know what to do with him. He obviously has a lot to learn about Delfino if he wants this to work, and it'd be funny if Justin ended up being the one to teach him. But enough about him because Justin just got like 50 kajillion cool points for tellin' Chris like it is. I think we even had a moment with that little speech he gave. I luff him now! I hope it stays this way... *Hint Hint, Miss Author*
And I agree with Lynn. Target is the shit! LOL.
Author's Response: Of course she wasn't supposed to get married. But what kind of story would I have if people did what they're supposed to do! Excess is good, in this case. In most cases, actually lol. I love their Holiday in the Hamptons, and Upgrade U was the song on my mind, too. That song seriously makes me happy, for some weird ass reason, so it's fine. You should just accept that you like B & J together. It's OKAY. They were designed to be likeable. And yeah, Chris has lots to learn about Devin, and he's getting there slowly... maybe too slow LOL. Justin gained some cool points from you, of all people? Amazing. I'm gonna enjoy the moment with y'all! I'll try to make it stay that way, but you know there are certainly no guarantees. By the way, Target is so my boutique in Heaven! Lynn is genius LOL. Thanks for the review, babe.
Reviewer: Selene
AnonymousDate: 09/28/06 - 11:26PM
Title: Some Major Denial
Woah, some major denial is right. Justin IS doing a good job of acting like he doesn't care about Devin and all but I don't buy it. Again I'm liking Beyonce's approach...... kill her with kindness girl. And get stomped on by the competition lol! (Sorry I'm a Devin fan) And I loved the scene with Justin and Chris, I love that she didn't tell him about what Justin did to her even though she full well could've and I love that Justin defended her. I knew there was some love left in there! Everyone's lookin so crazy right now. More soon Ash!
Author's Response: Did ya ever think that maybe he's not acting? Huh? HUH?! Yeah, right LOL. He's probably head over heels. Killing her with kindness does seem like the right thing to do, but you're right, people take kindness for weakness and Devin is on the prowl! Beyonce is not stupid (in this story) though, so don't count her out. I liked the Justin/Chris interaction, too, though I hadn't really planned it, so I haven't found its purpose yet lol. Definitely lots of love and lots of crazy at the moment, but I'm trying to slowly rectify all these mistakes these people are making. I'll update as soon as I can! Thanks again, Sel!
Reviewer: Selene
AnonymousDate: 09/28/06 - 11:07PM
Title: You're Not Happy
I'm not sure how I missed two chapters but I'm just happy there's more for me to read! I'm glad we got to see Justin and Beyonce have a moment together and I like her approach. She just lets him do his thing. That'll probably end up bad for her because it's Justin and his thing is always bad bad bad! But I'm glad she's not stupid enough to self destruct over his mistakes. And for once, he's not making any! Except for letting Devin get married..... but that's more her fault than his so she's the one I'm pissed at today. That's gotta be a record, me liking Justin two chapters in a row.
Author's Response: I've been moving so fast, you're bound to miss a couple. It's okay, girl. I like Beyonce's approach, too... it's very drama-free, which Justin can really use at this point. His thing does tend to not bode well for any of his many bitches, but who knows what'll happen. She could self-destruct without any help from him at all! And yes, Devin getting married probably wasn't the best idea, but how else could I drive you guys crazy! Let's hope we keep on breaking records here. And even if we don't, I'm glad to hear from ya. Thanks, Selene!
Reviewer: shesarebel
AnonymousDate: 09/28/06 - 10:29PM
Title: Some Major Denial
whew!!! intense man...JT is puttin some knowledge on this chris dude..and i agree with him..devin "seems" way to strong to hold on to shit that happened btwn her and JT...but i love the beyonce/JT thing going on and i dont want to see him and devin back together..they're like cryptonite for each other and its a train wreck with them all the way lol..man good shit
Author's Response: Haha, I am an avid supporter of intensity, so I hope I can keep that up. And JT putting knowledge on anyone has to be intense, if it ends up making any sense lmao. Devin does seem a lot of things, but looks can be deceiving, eh? I love Beyonce and Justin, but I also love Devin and Justin, so I can make no promises as to what and who will end up together. Cryptonite and train wrecks are awesome for dramatic stories! But I hope you enjoy it, either way. Thank you so much for the review, girl!
Reviewer: GigiSignedDate: 09/28/06 - 09:26PM
Title: Some Major Denial
Hey maybe in a strange twist Chris and Beyonce can end up together.
Author's Response: And you know, it justtttt might happen. And I'm gonna shut up before I give anything away, but I'm so glad to see you reading, Gina! Thanks!
Reviewer: Awesome
AnonymousDate: 09/28/06 - 08:49PM
Title: Some Major Denial
oh I really like Justin now
Author's Response: Well that's always a good thing. Yay!
