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Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 11/18/06 - 03:32AM
Title: Chapter 32
Melody is one stupid woman!
Reviewer: alimera
Signed
Date: 11/14/06 - 09:03AM
Title: Chapter 30
oooo...i hate this anthony guy! kill him justin! lol...update again soon!
Author's Response: aww donte hate.. i must tell you anthony's potratied after my best freind.. thanks for reading
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 11/11/06 - 01:45AM
Title: Chapter 25
Ok. Nicole needs a beatdown!
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 11/05/06 - 01:49AM
Title: Chapter 18
So wait she was watchingt them in the shower! This girl is sick!
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 10/18/06 - 01:54AM
Title: Chapter 14
Ok that was, funny getting caught in the shower like that.
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 10/17/06 - 09:41PM
Title: Chapter 13
Why is Nicole such a bitch!?
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 10/16/06 - 10:21PM
Title: Chapter 9
He better listen to his Mama!
Reviewer: Sindi
Signed
Date: 10/16/06 - 02:25PM
Title: Chapter 1
Hey Melissa, I like your story idea and yoru story so far, But improving the spelling would make it that much better, maybe if you looked for a Beta Reader *cough cough* they can help. I would be more than happy to cause I think this story could get far. With good pimping too. So think about it, or if you know you can do it yourself do it before you post up the chapter. Hope that was some author to author help there.
Author's Response: thanks,i dunno what beta reader is and doenst help that im tech chanllanged but i do write my storys and then use spell check.im trying to get them out after i do that but work is work,but sure im always willing to ask for help. and thanks
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 10/16/06 - 03:44AM
Title: Chapter 7
Nicole's a bitch! Her mother is crazy!
Author's Response: i was watching flavor of love and i was like hey lets make nicole like mew york and her mother crazy like new yorks mom so thank flaver flave
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 10/16/06 - 12:42AM
Title: Chapter 5
Nicole better not try and break them up!
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