Author's Response: I\'m glad u love my story, I\'m going to write the tenth chapter probably today or tomorrow I\'ll update u when it comes thank u
Reviewer: SindiSignedDate: 10/23/06 - 10:16AM
Title: Chapter Three: Confrontation Between JC and Ashley
aww good chappie but like i said before try and start a new line and dont just put a full stop at the end of the paragraph. hope this helps with makign yoru story that bti better. Update soon.
Reviewer: SindiSignedDate: 10/23/06 - 09:35AM
Title: Chapter One: The Bombshell and The Pact
Oh i'm glad i agve this a chance it's really interesting but you need to put periods or full stops and make sentences. It makes it flow more otherwise it gets confusing. And try starting a new line for when someone else speaks. But besides that well done.
