Reviews For undone
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Signed Date: 01/16/07 - 06:07PM Title: unbalanced

well look at justin now. finally taking initiative, almost couldn't believe me eyes...lol. and lo and behold, caydence avoiding what's right in front of her. tisk. great update!

Author's Response: after all the ho and hum he actually did what he said he was going to....strange i know lol thanks so much for the review!


Reviewer: cae329 Signed Date: 01/16/07 - 05:56PM Title: unbalanced

i loved the update, fantastic work :)


Author's Response: thanks I'm glad you liked it!!


Reviewer: JoJo Signed Date: 01/16/07 - 05:38PM Title: unbalanced

Finally he did something! but i agree with justin...he has shitty timing :) i love this story...can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: the boy has little thought but of himself, but at least he grew some lol thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 01/16/07 - 05:23PM Title: unbalanced

Cue the scary music...this shit is getting serious!!

I love it!!! Ooohh...I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response: this is definately serious, but maybe cue the sad song rather than scary music, not sure lol thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: JoJo Signed Date: 01/15/07 - 03:40PM Title: unenvied

every chapter makes me want to read more...amazing job! can't wait to see what's ahead for these guyz!

Author's Response: there is a lot to come for these two! thanks so much for the review, it's always good to know that people like what i'm writing :)


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 01/15/07 - 12:42PM Title: unenvied

Mystic Hollie is confused by that one - so she just sense yet more confusion from all parties. Which always makes for the drama...

Author's Response: confusion does lie ahead for sure. and drama too, all around lol


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 01/15/07 - 11:24AM Title: unenvied

ooooh caydence... what are we going to do with youu? she'll work things out her own way... eventually... even if it takes her forever. thank God for leslie tho. if it weren't for her the two of them would tip toe around the idea of each other for the rest of their lives. we just really need to get mac out of here. he's too much of a safety net for cayy. anyway. great update!

Author's Response: leslie is am important piece in all of this. and poor mac, every one wants to give him the boot. :) thanks for the review


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 01/15/07 - 09:39AM Title: unenvied

he needs to win her over and she needs to stop being stupid! I mean, Mac is a fairly nice guy, but c'mon....:) love it!

Author's Response: i know. i know. there is only so much dancing around the issue one can do, but it wouldn't be good it there wasn't suspense right?? lol thanks for reviewing


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 01/15/07 - 01:53AM Title: unenvied

oh man. the road these two have ahead of them... i cannot wait to read all about it.

Author's Response: it is a road. they have a lot to figure out. i have a feeling that things are going to start getting very clear


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 01/14/07 - 09:49AM Title: unbearable

Oh Caydence.  Oh Caydence....

I'm speechless.  Poor Justin :( but I still love the story!



Author's Response: you all wanted something big and here it is lol maybe not the big you wanted, but regardless...i'm glad you're still liking it and thanks for the review!





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