Reviewer: Hobs
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Date: 01/14/07 - 07:11AM
Title: unbearable
Mystic Hollie would have made a prediction if the stupid woman hadn;t already worked out for herself that this was a really bad idea. But she has, so I'm redundant right now *lol*
Author's Response: the messes we get ourselves into. mystic hollie was right either way. thanks for the review:)
Reviewer: smrkks
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Date: 01/14/07 - 01:18AM
Title: unbearable
ummm hi cay wake up. nice work. lol im sorry but that's just so funny... the whole "i cant believe that she reduced me to being the woman in the relationship." obviously that's awful and shame on me for my lack of feminist power but God that is just like the most perfect line. definitely my favorite fan fiction line to date. lol anywaaay... high five to cay. at least she's starting to figure things out. even if she's slow as hell. nice updaaaaate! :)
Author's Response: i'm glad to see that people are actually on her side :) she needs people on her side. good to see that people like the line, its always good to put a guy in his place lol thanks for the glowing review, it means a lot!!
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
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Date: 01/14/07 - 12:15AM
Title: unbearable
i honestly don't want to do anything but slap caydence. and that's the truth. i'll start to like her again when she comes to her senses. :)update soon.
Author's Response: poor caydence lol she'll be more clear headed the next chapter. thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: cae329
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Date: 01/13/07 - 11:32PM
Title: unbearable
grrrrrr. no, she shoulda never left, and she should have never been committed with mac at the end. you better update soon!
Author's Response: no worries she didn't really commit, just kept it going. she has to get her wits about her lol. thanks so much for the feedback!
Reviewer: lesanne
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Date: 01/13/07 - 11:14PM
Title: unbearable
oh man. she is so messed up. seriously she is messed up.
this is going to get worse before it gets better. good thing i have popcorn to eat while i watch.
Author's Response: much worse. but that's half the fun, digging out. so glad we're doing late night writing again :)
Reviewer: Hobs
Signed
Date: 01/12/07 - 07:10PM
Title: unexcusable
For the record, Mystic Hollie's Inner Eye is currently clouded by lots of general being pissed off at the world. she's working on it ;o)
Author's Response: i know the feeling. i guess i'll just have to wait until her inner eye clears *sigh* lol
Reviewer: cae329
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Date: 01/12/07 - 06:09PM
Title: unexcusable
AHH I LOVED IT. Bravo girl! Ps, I think I have a few more songs, I'll send them over soon :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!! send them my way i'd love to have em :)
Reviewer: smrkks
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Date: 01/12/07 - 04:37PM
Title: unexcusable
oh goodness gracious. she doesnt need someone stable and normal and boring. and thank god that they finally had sex. really. i was starting to feel the sexual tension from both of them. lol. nice woork. great chapter.
Author's Response: they were at a wall weren't they. and caydence is a confused girl lol give her time. thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: matthews baby
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Date: 01/12/07 - 12:52PM
Title: unexcusable
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! She just...oooh...!!
Author's Response: ooooooh is right. drama major. thanks for the review:)
Reviewer: Hobs
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Date: 01/12/07 - 12:49PM
Title: unexcusable
Yes, because he's going to be thrilled when it comes to asking her why she wasn;t there at eight. I'd normally bet she wouldn;t be answering with the truth, but this woman is weird like that *lol*
Author's Response: apparently i made a mistake in not making it clear enough that mac was calling late the night before and making the date for the next night....must proofread better lol. but you're absolutely right she is weird like that :) and what about Mystic Hollie? she has nothing to say about this??
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