Reviews For undone
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Signed Date: 01/12/07 - 12:03PM Title: unexcusable

ok, so, i definitely didn't expect that. haha. it's gonna starting getting (more) complicated which inevitably leads to drama....can't wait. :)

Author's Response: more drama. can't avoid it :) so glad you liked it and thanks for the review


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 01/12/07 - 11:28AM Title: unexcusable

Oh shit. Justin and Caydence got it on! LoL. Now what?! I'm sure Caydence is gonna pull the just friends card on Justin's ass. And what about Mac? He called and came home with the movies and food and she wasn't there. Why the hell is she babbling about that's what she needs in her life? A, her man is gonna be suspicious of her now. And B, if that's what she needed, why did she take her happy ass to JL's and HJKAJFKDJAKLDF his fine ass?

 I should be a lawyer.

 

ROfl. Smooch smooch girl. 



Author's Response: wow. what an argument. forget other plans go to law school! first off...mac's call was about the next night so she's not in hot water...yet. and give the girl some time she confused as all get out. and sometimes what you need isn't what you want lol how's that for a rebuttal??


Reviewer: Maggie Signed Date: 01/12/07 - 10:53AM Title: unexcusable

I was always told cheaters never prosper, but I think if you wake up next to that man, you've hit the jackpot :)



Author's Response: i guess you could look at it that way lol. thanks for reading and reviewing! means a lot to me :)


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 01/12/07 - 09:17AM Title: unexcusable

oh man. she is definately digging herself into a hole. not that i blame her. its hard not to like asshole-ish boys. i should know; i always go for grey's anatomy alex guys and just hope i won't get hurt. again. :)

wonderful chapter. you know i love it.

Author's Response: i thikn we all have a secret love for the bad boys, and it doesn't help he is being a doll to her. and so the drama begins. i guess you figured i went for it and now i get to fix it lol


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 01/12/07 - 08:32AM Title: unexcusable

Uh oh.....

There is no other response for this than "uh oh."  

I'm dumbfounded!



Author's Response: big uh oh. and now comes the real conflict....i'm glad i could leave you speechless lol thanks for the feedback!


Reviewer: MiracleBabe Signed Date: 01/12/07 - 05:16AM Title: unexcusable

Okay well that was great and she shouldn't have left till round 2 or just not at all . Mac needs to go AWAY.

Author's Response: And so quickly everyone turns on mac....it wouldn't be drama if she stayed or realistic lol thanks again for reviewing!


Reviewer: MiracleBabe Signed Date: 01/12/07 - 03:32AM Title: unvoiced

Do the damn thang Mrs. Harless that's what i'm talking abotu  Justin listen to yo mama boy go for it. Oh Mac need to go the hell on i like him a lil but it's just like that movie S.H.A you the guy she engaged to but you wanted Reese to go back to her husband. Looking for forward to more and i love this story . You are a great writer and I love reading stories from great writers.

Author's Response: i'm glad mac has some fans. he really isn't a bad guy :) thanks so much for reading and reviewing, it keeps me going


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 01/10/07 - 07:39PM Title: unvoiced

Good chapter Ash! Justin needs to tell Caydence how he feels. Whooo. Cuteness shall ensue, yes yes? Oh and forgive me Ash, this doesn't really pertain to you, but as for your review below by Kal...why on earth are you reading when you should have been doing your home work hoe? Omg, our friendship is done.

 

lmao. whee update soon girl! 



Author's Response: i might just pass out from the mere fact that you reviewed *fanning self* lol something will ensue you can count on that :)


Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Signed Date: 01/10/07 - 06:59PM Title: unvoiced

mac annoys me, lol. caydence needs to drop him. but seriously, justin just needs to grab her and kiss her already. mac is disposable. :)

Author's Response: things seem so clear when your on observer :) its going to get interesting real soon. there wouldn't be a sequel if there wasn't the possibility...thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 01/10/07 - 01:14PM Title: unvoiced

Okay... his mom is telling him to steal other guys' girlfriends? that is so not right *lol*


Author's Response: well this is the woman who calls his father the sperm donor, so i figured she might egg him on :) love the review as always





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