Reviews For undone
Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 01/10/07 - 10:58AM Title: unvoiced

now i want to like mac. because he's sweet and that's what every girl wants, but its not happening anymore.

justin needs to do something asshole-ish before i totally like him again.

Author's Response: i'm telling you. you are destined to love this justin as much as you do the real justin. althought i cannot say that he won't go asshole again...


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 01/10/07 - 08:22AM Title: unvoiced

You're cruel.  This is torture.  Justin's Mom? and she's getting in on it too!  things better start happening soon! Sheesh!!

love it :)



Author's Response: i wasn't going for toture, but i'll take it :) its building promise! thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 01/08/07 - 11:53AM Title: unbridled

You know why I'm stupid? I only just realised every chapter of the story begins with "un." I am not an observant person...


Author's Response: at least you've caught up with the rest of us now lol i would never call Mystic Hollie unobservant (hmmm future possible chapter name)


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 01/08/07 - 11:21AM Title: unbridled

ahhh i love the two of them. so much. nice work. update soon.

Author's Response:

i'm so glad people like them together, or eles this story would not work lol thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: Maggie Signed Date: 01/08/07 - 08:58AM Title: unbridled

Women always have better memories then men. That's why we get to punish them when we remember our anniversary and they forget. Justin sure is crafty though, I'll give him that.

Author's Response: justin thinks he's crafty, he forgets that women always know when men are up to something...men are just disadvantaged all around lol thanks for the review :)


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 01/08/07 - 08:27AM Title: unbridled

Oh, it's getting good.  Not that it wasn't before....but Oooh Weee....I want some action!!

Author's Response: can't you just feel it building? slowly, but surely  :0 thanks so much for reviewing


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 01/08/07 - 03:11AM Title: unbridled

oh they're cute. i mean leslie and caydence of course. not justin. ;) well he is kind of cute. even though he has ass-like tendencies.

Author's Response: you can never have enough girl friends :) and as for justin, well he can't help it if he's an ass lol


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 01/07/07 - 02:15PM Title: unobligated

That last conversation utterly confused me. but that's good... I think *lol*

Author's Response:

its supposed to be confusing and telling, all at once lol. let's hopefully rule in favor of it begin a good thing :)


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 01/07/07 - 01:59AM Title: unobligated

that was a really good chapter... it was nice to see some new emotions out of cay and at the same time incredibly frustrating that she refuses to admit how sweet what j was saying at the end was. can they be together noww? pleeease? lol nice work.

Author's Response: its funny how often we can't see whats right in front of us. there is still so much to come, keep reading :)


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 01/06/07 - 08:27PM Title: unobligated

Oh, I want a Justin Timberlake to come be my knight.....every girl could use one :)

and I will be so mad at you if they don't eventually end up together!!!! hehe :) I love this story



Author's Response: everybody needs a knight every now and then, and justin would definately be my choise :) you'll just have to keep reading to find out lol





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