Reviews For undone
Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 12/27/06 - 10:29PM Title: uncertain

oh man. you're setting this all up so nicely. i can't wait to read more. :) its going to be amazing i am sure. and i miss my writing partner, too! we will meet again soon i hope. we move into our new house soon, and then i just have to wait for wireless to work. :)

Author's Response: i'm glad you think its coming together and you would know better than anyone. one more week and then back to our normal writing habits. as for wireless...good luck with that


Reviewer: drmafreak2006 Signed Date: 12/25/06 - 01:45PM Title: unforgiving

aww i mlove caydence... she is so funny cany wait to read more... Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: i'm glad you like her, she's a personal favorite. hope your holiday was amazing and thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Maggie Signed Date: 12/21/06 - 02:27PM Title: unforgiving

I'm gone for one day and you post a update. Do we need to synchronize watches or something? Great chapter.

Author's Response: i can't help it lol, sometimes inspiration just hits :) next time i will check with you before i post lol


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 12/20/06 - 09:06PM Title: unforgiving

amazing ending to the chapter. i couldn't stop laughing at the mental image

Author's Response:

glad i could make you laugh :) hopefully it makes up for some of the drama...thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 12/20/06 - 01:10PM Title: unforgiving

Ho hum... give me more. Before Mystic Hollie has to see grave misfortune befalling you in the form of Hollie kicking your ass and chaining it to your computer until she gets an update *lol*


Author's Response: the last thing i want is mystic hollie after me, i will therefore do everything in my power to get another chapter out soon :) i'm typing as fast as i can lol


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 12/20/06 - 08:33AM Title: unforgiving

Yay for winning Caydence over :)  and I was so happy to see the "update" e-mail in my inbox this morning :-D!

I love this story



Author's Response: leslie and i made a deal that she has yet to make good on, so i wrote. huge blizzard and no work for me so maybe more?


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 12/20/06 - 07:53AM Title: unforgiving

lol. i can totally see justin with hose on his head. funny funny funny. now he needs to start talking about chapped lips.

Author's Response: i know right? a little reference to SNL never hurt anyone :) and i'm waiting for your chapter now...


Reviewer: matthews baby Signed Date: 12/20/06 - 04:02AM Title: unforgiving

LMAO!! dude put patty hoes on his head HAHAHA! that's too funny! great chapter ash!

Author's Response: little family tradition i slipped in there. if i could only see it in person...thanks for the feedback!


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 12/20/06 - 02:14AM Title: unaware

oh my gooodnesss! wonderful! im so excited.

Author's Response:

i'm lgad you're excited! thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 12/19/06 - 03:58PM Title: unaware

lol i loved how he laid on the charm nice and thick for her mom. best thing ever. great update!

Author's Response: you think that was thick, that was nothing :) it only gets better from here lol





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