Reviews For undone
Reviewer: Maggie Signed Date: 03/08/07 - 02:16PM Title: uncovered

Now would be the time for Justin to say something. Ugh. Update soon.

Author's Response: *insert justins response here* lol i'm working on it


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 03/08/07 - 01:16PM Title: uncovered

she loves him....come on, we all know he loves her to death....that boy needs to just get those three words out and EVERYTHING will be oh so perfect...

Author's Response: it seems so simple in theory doesn't it...but its his turn now, I'll agree with that :)


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 03/08/07 - 11:56AM Title: uncovered

*blinks*

 *has nothing to say*

 

*this may be a first* 



Author's Response:

*shocked by hollie's silence*

*not sure how to respond* lol


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/08/07 - 09:45AM Title: uncovered

Again, I'm left hanging.  This is a form of cruel, slow torture, really.  But I will say Kudos to Cay for letting it all out and growing up a little :) Now we just need Justin to make it all cheesy and romantic...heh...I hope you're not offended by my demanding reviews, I think I ran out of compliments some where back around chapter 15 and now I'm left to resort to begging/demanding to satisfy my romance needs....Oh goodness...

Author's Response: you are allowed to demand lol let it all out. and i agree it was big of cay and now is in justins court...lol always love your reviews :)


Reviewer: S Jane Signed Date: 03/08/07 - 05:13AM Title: uncovered

i didn't realise i was holding in a breath untill the end. That boy better say it back if he knows whats good for him hehe

Author's Response: its has a lot riding on it, huh? boys rarely do whats best and there lies all of our problems lol thanks for the review :)


Reviewer: JamieLynn Signed Date: 03/08/07 - 04:00AM Title: uncovered

OMFG! I'm fully addicted to this story! I read the previous one until four o'clock yesterday morning and now I finished this at 3 o'clock this morning. I'm addicted I  tell you! Please update soon. Oh, I wanted to mention how I love how you made Cay, Justin, and Leslie so witty. I love it.

Author's Response: lol while i'm not one to condone the lack of sleep in this case i completely support it :) i'm glad you like their wit, i love writing it thanks for the review


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 03/08/07 - 03:26AM Title: uncovered

my chest just heaved and released the biggest sigh that i didn't even know it was holding. if that chapter wasn't done to perfection.... idk what i wanna say. but it was done perfectly. everything about it... even the heartbreaking departure that i would love to yell at you for if it wasn't so damn perfect.

Author's Response: geez stace. that was an amazing review. i don't even want to spoil it with an attempt to be witty, so thanks :)


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 03/08/07 - 03:13AM Title: uncovered

ugh. you end it without him saying it back? pure evil. but other than that the chapter was amazing. of course, you already knew that.

Author's Response: well thanks :) and you know i have to keep you all wondering whats the fun in a good solid no loose ends ending? none. lol


Reviewer: matthews baby Signed Date: 03/06/07 - 08:30PM Title: unexplained

ooooooooh he's in trouble!

Author's Response: in so many words yes. he is in trouble. but when is this guy not in trouble really lol


Reviewer: Maggie Signed Date: 03/06/07 - 08:26PM Title: unexplained

That was so good, great job. Love Jay and Cay :)



Author's Response: thanks so much. i'm glad you like them :)





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