Reviews For undone
Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 03/02/07 - 02:04PM Title: unthinkable

ummm yessss! they finally "bumped" into each other even though they were in different countries. now we just need justin to not be such a freaking idiot. closing the door in her face. psh. whiney little brat doesn't know what he wants. lol.

Author's Response: they did 'bump' into eachother, just so you could get some sleep! and justin well men are always confused aren't they?? lol


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 03/02/07 - 11:57AM Title: unthinkable

i was so happy she went to montreal and then he just gives her the boot? sad sad sad...



Author's Response: it couldn't just all fall into place! that's no fun and unrealistic lol hang in there it'll work out...


Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Signed Date: 03/02/07 - 11:25AM Title: unthinkable

these last two chapters, although very good, have confused the hell out of me. lol...also, Stephanie? she needs to get a life and a new man. ... update soon!


Author's Response: lol really? i'm sorry. i hope it all made sense in the end. and stephanie...poor girl thinks she has a chance lol


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 03/02/07 - 09:27AM Title: unthinkable

oh goodness. i can't blame him for shutting the door; its much more graceful than the words i might have said in the situation. and good for caydence, for fighting for him, and good for justin for not letting the fight be an easy one. she needs to work for this. and ok, totally glad that leslie kicked justin's butt about stephanie. and really, how could he expect anything different? it wasn't like leslie was sunshine and flowers when she met caydence for the first time.

Author's Response: its strange, they are both doing what is right for them and yet the situation is still so unsettled. and leslie always gets to be the voice of reason, i should write a story about her....you would like that too much tho lol


Reviewer: Maggie Signed Date: 03/02/07 - 08:59AM Title: unthinkable

Really great chapter. Now if you could update once a day I think we would be in good shape. You have no idea how much I missed reading your story when I was sick.

Author's Response: if i had the time i would. you were sick? i'm so sorry, i hope you're feeling better now and thanks for taking the time to reivew :)


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/02/07 - 07:57AM Title: unthinkable

He closed the door?? Idiot.  I expected stumbling, mumbling, hell, maybe even a little yelling....but he just closes the door?  Ooohh....such poise :)  I love this story, and I think you're an incredibly talented writer.  you inspire me :)

Author's Response: sometimes no words is far better than what would come naturally. i'm so glad you like it, i love your reviews lol and thank you so much, you don't know how much it means to hear that :)


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 03/02/07 - 06:17AM Title: unthinkable

I am far too good. I thought she was going to fly out there... wasn;t so sure how he was gonna react, but now having read it I'm wonderi9ng what else she was expecting... more please!


Author's Response: hold on *getting down to bow to hollie's mystic abilities* lol i never doubted that you would figure it out, but i hoped otherwise. it's so close to the end....any more predictions lol


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 02/28/07 - 04:53PM Title: unraveling

i think missy is....hmm...some sort of person involved in the movie? geez, i dunno who she is but i need another undone fix!

Author's Response: lol all this fascination with missy...you'll find out soon enough, or i guess more like remember...either way thanks for the review!!


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 02/28/07 - 08:16AM Title: unraveling

Ok....I'm totally confused...Who is Missy? and What is Caydence up to? And Oooh...I hope Justin's  hasn't given in to that other girl yet....Oh my, and just when I thought it couldn't get any more suspensful!  I don't usually like to demand things of the writer, becuase I know how annoying it can be, but girrrlll...you've got to update soon!

Author's Response: missy, i'll give you a hint (chapter 21) as for justin and caydence, well that's why its called a cliff hanger lol i'm working on the update, promise


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 02/28/07 - 05:56AM Title: unraveling

Mystic Hollie has a prediction, but it's a little out there so she's just going to sit on it til she finds out if it's true or not. Then she can lie and claim she was right anyway *lol*

Author's Response: lol then where will the proof be....just tell me....i guess i'm going to have to wait to see if you're right :)





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