Reviews For undone
Reviewer: anabelle21 Signed Date: 02/24/07 - 11:32PM Title: unfinished

cant wait for the next chapter hope its soon. keep up the good writing..i cant stop reading ur story...

Author's Response: i'm so glad that you like it, heavens knows i've enjoyed writing it. thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 02/24/07 - 09:25PM Title: unfinished

Oh...she gone and done it now!  I'm so torn, because I can understand her fear, but I totally agree with Justin's actions/wants from her.....it's obvious she loves the boy!!  Oh...and thanks for feeding the addiction, the withdrawl symptoms are a bitch! :)

Author's Response: yes she has, but its all in her hands now. and justin is finally not the one screwing up, yay lol. i try to discourage addiction on principle, but just this once i'll try to keep you supplied lol


Reviewer: JoJo Signed Date: 02/24/07 - 08:02PM Title: unfinished

totally had me thinking it was justin...good one!! good chapter...can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: a little trick i wanted to try, but you knew it wouldn't be thtat easy right??? i'm writing as fast as i can lol


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 02/24/07 - 07:50PM Title: unfinished

wow, she was going to try. i am proud of her for that, but man. i'm totally on team justin right now.

Author's Response: she was, she has issues, but is not stupid lol team justin is glad to have you :)


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 02/23/07 - 11:57AM Title: unsaid

i didn't leave you feedback last night because, well, i am too far into my pity party. ;) but really, i love it. because he's having a backbone and he knows his limits, which is something he needs to have a grasp on and because we finally saw caydence as a round character. love it.

Author's Response: completely understandable. but i'm glad that you love it, being my offical sounding board and all it would be terrible if you didn't lol


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 02/23/07 - 09:56AM Title: unsaid

I think he did the right thing.  Even though he's miseable, I think it was the right thing to do....she needs to stew in this for a little bit...(and here I go, talking like they're real!)  Oh...give me more soon, I'm addicted and I can't go long without a fix :)

Author's Response: i totally agree, but i could be a little bias. i love that you talk about them like they're real. and i'll get something up soon promise, if nothing else as a reward for your diligent reviewing :)


Reviewer: JoJo Signed Date: 02/23/07 - 01:51AM Title: unsaid

NO...BRING HER BACK!!! it is really sad that i'm so into this story! i'm getting funny looks from my bro cuz i'm yelling at the computer rite now. 

Author's Response: i get looks all the time when i'm reading lol glad i could compel some emotion. and even more glad you left a review :)


Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Signed Date: 02/23/07 - 01:23AM Title: unsaid

i don't know whose side i'm on now. lol, you got me so torn between these two. although, honestly, i have a love/hate relationship with caydence, because she's so damn stubborn it's ridiculous....anywho, good chapter! update soon!

Author's Response: lol well caydence is a one of kind to be sure. as for sides, its good to see a little of both. the review is much appriciated :)


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 02/22/07 - 11:49PM Title: unsaid

no no no no! no, you can't do this! those two completely belong together.....sigh....make things better please? :)

Author's Response: lol there are more chapters, does that help? thats all i can say about that. and thanks so much for reviewing it seriously keeps me writing :)


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 02/21/07 - 08:40AM Title: unfair

Hmmm....I can totally understand her commitment phobia, but at the same time it's so damn frustrating! I just want het to give in to JL...I think you might have other plans though....!

Author's Response: but thay would be too easy wouldn't it :) thanks for the reivew





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