Reviews For undone
Reviewer: JoJo Signed Date: 02/13/07 - 02:56AM Title: unforeseen

i feel for caydence and everything but...COME ON!! she has justin practically begging here!!! get it together! can't wait for more!

Author's Response: i know the girl is fighting a losing battle. she'll cave, maybe :) thanks for the review!


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 02/12/07 - 08:38PM Title: unforeseen

oh my goodness let's just talk about how i was planning to use lyrics from "stars and boulevards" for an upcoming... but not the ones you used lol. have you heard their song "sunday best"? it's also fantasticc. anywaaay... i kind of really like seeing justin with some balls that are justified... no pun intended sorry couldn't think of a different word- long day. but, yeah, i mean... it's tough for her because of the publicity i guess which she's going to find impossible to swallow because she's cay... so drama for the future i assuuume. broken hearts... and rainbows at the end hopefullyyyy? lol nice work.

Author's Response: i have had my eye on the song for awhile,  just needed a good reason to use it and yes the entire cd os good :) well before the rainbows are the storms right?


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 02/12/07 - 01:22PM Title: unforeseen

He's co-dependent. She's commit phobic. They could both use some industrial strength therapy. *nods*


Author's Response: are you offering? lol they do indeed have their problems. thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 02/12/07 - 08:18AM Title: unforeseen

oh that media...i was wondering when that was going to become a major factor in everything.

Author's Response: it has to come up eventually right? another thing her cay's long list...thanks for the revew!


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 02/12/07 - 03:25AM Title: unforeseen

sigh. thank you for the break from reflection papers and short stories and exams and everything. i needed the break. i feel bad for caydence with the paps, but she is starting to get on my nerves.

and you are supposed to be in bed asleep.

Author's Response: sleep is overrated and hard to do when you dan hardly breathe...so when are you going to update??? lol


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 02/09/07 - 06:23PM Title: unaligned

well, at least that was handled maturely and at least she actually went when she remembered. lol. ooooh cay. gotta love a girl who puts her girls first. im sorry but you just do. nice update!

Author's Response: amazingly enough sometimes justin does behave like an adult. and caydence is definately loyal to her friends, maybe too much...


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 02/09/07 - 02:57PM Title: unaligned

Absolutely splendid update :)



Author's Response: well thanks so much!! it's about to get even more interesting...


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 02/09/07 - 11:48AM Title: unaligned

Wow. And there was me thinking he'd throw a hissy fit? Is he growing up? *Mystic Hollie eyes her crystal ball* *it says 'ask again later' and she realises it's a magic 8 ball*


Author's Response:

i know justin's all grown up, at least for now that is. maybe you could ask that magic eight ball when its going to get warmer here!


Reviewer: lesanne Signed Date: 02/09/07 - 09:23AM Title: unaligned

sad day but i still don't like caydence very much. wish i could have been around while you were writing but i pased out right after i got home around 11 last night.

Author's Response: all i can say is that i gave you fair warning on that one. be prepared...i wish you could have been there too, hopefully soon, right?


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 02/09/07 - 08:36AM Title: unaligned

She got away easy with that one....he should have made her work for it!!

I have no idea where this is going,  but I'm so praying for a happy ending on this one :)  (that's a not-so-subtle hint!!) heheh



Author's Response: there is so much going on...including justin transistioning into a more adult role and caydence well, you're just going to have to keep readong lol thanks for the review!





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