Reviewer: crash_coincidence Signed Date: 03/23/07 - 08:34PM Title: The Beginning: Part 7

cute. loved the rain scene. its raining here, my favorite :) can't wait for more...

Author's Response: rain is one of the best things. i know in a few weeks it'll be raining where I am...thanks so much for the review :)


Reviewer: vessy Signed Date: 03/23/07 - 07:46AM Title: The Beginning: Part 7

this chapter was amazing!!! really good! can't wait for more.

Author's Response: glad you liked it! more to come...


Reviewer: LoveYou2 Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 10:23PM Title: The Beginning: Part 7

Aw, that be cute. I want a kiss :( I can't get too excited though b/c I keep thinking about the first chap! Update soon! :D

Author's Response: lol writing this chapter made me want to go out and get a kiss like that. don't worry, the first chapter is so far in the future....lets just enjoy the present:)


Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 06:27PM Title: The Beginning: Part 7

wow, that was amazing.  update again soon!

Author's Response: thanks so much!


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 04:40PM Title: The Beginning: Part 7

Oh, that was just amazing and I loved it and I want to be kissed like that! Wooo, rain and all!  I just keep thinking about the crappy first chapter, or the ending, and I wish that this would stay fairy-tale like forever!  Amazing story, I love it :)

Author's Response: thanks so much for your feedback! I think all of us want to be kissed like that...


Reviewer: Maggie Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 04:11PM Title: The Beginning: Part 7

I love it. So you want to tell me why they break up later on? Pretty please with a cherry on top? Or better yet, have them not break up at all.

Author's Response: they break up because....lol, like i'd let that all out...maybe i'll give you a hint in a few chapters :)


Reviewer: JamieLynn Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 03:53PM Title: The Beginning: Part 7

Yay!!! *claps hands excitedly* So romantic...but that damn gloomy first chapter keeps lurking like a black cloud. *sniffle, sniffle* GRREAT job. But I didnt need to tell you that now did I? : )

Author's Response: thanks so much. you're just too kind to me. and as for the first chapter....wellllll, let's just focus on the present for now, shall we? :)


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 02:36PM Title: The Beginning: Part 7

lol she's a funny girl. that kiss was so sweet and romantic and aaah. that's all. lol. nice update. :)

Author's Response: i was definitely going for sweet and romantic and i'm glad i got that across. thanks so much for the review!


Reviewer: JamieLynn Signed Date: 03/19/07 - 12:24AM Title: The Beginning: Part 6

Ok...if I havent said it like a gillion times before I'll say it again...YOU'RE AWESOME! I really just love, love, love your writing style. This and Weathered are like my faves! LOL. Oh and you also incorporated my two favorite things...Strarbucks and John Mayer...so that ups you on my totem pole of awesome authors LOL!

Author's Response: john mayer and starbucks are like my two passions in life. I love that you feel the same way lol. thanks so much for your review. it made my morning :)


Reviewer: LoveYou2 Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 04:26PM Title: The Beginning: Part 6

Aw they're so cute, but I can't help think back to the first chapter. *sad*

Author's Response: the first chapter always kinds of looms over you. Thanks for the feedback:)





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