Reviews For Raw Intimacy
Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/27/07 - 12:23PM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

Uh-oh...drama is in the air!  This is getting so intense, what happens next??? :)

Author's Response: Drama is in the air for sure. It's getting intense and it's going to countinue in that direction. You'll just have to keep reading! Thanks for the review.


Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 03/27/07 - 09:46AM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

well she showed him that she cares more than cameron does, that's for sure!  update again soon...i want to know what happens next!  i'm SO hooked on this story!  :)

Author's Response: That's for sure! I'm thrilled you're hooked cause more is coming.


Reviewer: Lovergirl Signed Date: 03/27/07 - 08:28AM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

killer chapter. cam needs to go now!

Author's Response: Not a fan of Cameron's? lol


Reviewer: Alexandra Signed Date: 03/27/07 - 08:28AM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

wow that was heavy. great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Alex.


Reviewer: d_simplicity Signed Date: 03/26/07 - 11:00PM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

Ooooooooo......^_^. Now Justin got help for his addiction, by the way, hooray for Beth. To hell wit Cam. They clearly got feelings for each other. I feel sorry for Jake though. But um there was a part where Gia called him beth's "soul mate." I'm thinking he just might be.  But i'm wondering how can i get help for my addiction since i'm so into this story? Oh i know! More soon! Hehehe...loved it. :-D. Great work.

Author's Response: Beth finally spoke her mind, though not in the way she had planned. Soul mates? Who knows... And yes, the only cure for the addiction to this story is more, so who am I to deprive you? More is coming.


Reviewer: JoJo Signed Date: 03/26/07 - 10:12PM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

I'm glad Beth told Cam something!!! yea it's really smart to give someone alcohol after coming back from rehab...i was reading and i was like "NO SHE DIDN'T"  lovin the story. keep em coming!!

Author's Response: Oh yes she did! What can I say, she's a little thoughtless sometimes. Beth certainly put her in her place though.


Reviewer: jeannie Signed Date: 03/26/07 - 09:31PM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

awwwwwww they care about eachother. i totally loved how jealous he got. she's going to be one girl that he can't have so easily... she's a challenge to him and i think he knows that and it intrigues him. i love it girl and i cant stand cameron! how could she egg him on to drink?! lol shes got to go!

Author's Response: Yes, there was a hint of jelousy wasn't there? Beth is certainly the one who he understands yet can't figure out completely. No one likes Cameron lol Thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: crash_coincidence Signed Date: 03/26/07 - 08:57PM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

hate cameron. officially. never really liked her much to being with, but not i'm set against her. and i like were this is slowly leading :)

Author's Response: She's not a very popular character in this story is she? I'm glad you like where I'm taking this story and appreciate the feedback.


Reviewer: Crazy8 Signed Date: 03/26/07 - 06:57PM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

drama drama drama. justin needs to get his ass in gear and get beth. now would be good.

Author's Response: He's slow to action when it comes to Beth. Of course, there are things that can cause feelings to speed up...


Reviewer: Mel Signed Date: 03/26/07 - 06:18PM Title: Slip Of The Tongue

love it to death! beth needs to realize that she's in love with justin.

Author's Response: So glad. Beth is slowly coming around. Very slowly.





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