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Reviewer: Stella
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Date: 03/09/07 - 07:03PM
Title: Work In Progress
that was so good! damn you need to update soon.
Author's Response: Updates are coming. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Alexandra
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Date: 03/09/07 - 06:55PM
Title: Work In Progress
nice tits? lol at least he notices her!
Reviewer: d_simplicity
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Date: 03/09/07 - 06:26PM
Title: Work In Progress
Aww ain't that sweet. Justin wasnt a total prick in this chapter. He's making mild progess buh some none the less. Um...so he checks bethany out eh? Hmm...interesting. Oooo....it's not long before he starts having sum feelings. hehe I can't wait. That was really good. Update soon!
Author's Response: It's some progress, which is a good thing at this point. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: smrkks
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Date: 03/09/07 - 06:25PM
Title: Work In Progress
well, there's a small smile on my face and i'm thinking "interesting..." at least he got a smile out of bethany. and, honestly, she should accept the compliment whether it was drug induced and disrespectful or not. she doesn't have to like it... but i think if justin timberlake said i had nice tits i wouldn't complain. lol. nice update.
Author's Response: Me too! Gotta love that man. Thanks for the feedback.
Reviewer: alimera
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Date: 03/09/07 - 09:40AM
Title: No More Playing Nice
well bethany is certainly holding her own...i love her! lol, update again soon!
Author's Response: Glad you love her. I tried to make her strong, yet tender at the same time.
Reviewer: LuLu
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Date: 03/08/07 - 07:22PM
Title: No More Playing Nice
Woohoo go Bethany! Finally she cussed his sorry ass out! That's what he gets, he hit the Mama button, and he got bitched out for it. I hope Rolling Stones airs all his dirty laundry. So who's Sarah? Some big secret in her past? I have an idea who she might be, but with all the twists you put in your stories there's no telling. But I can't wait to find out. Author's Response: You'll have to wait to find out who Sarah is... Hope your ready for a suprise!
Reviewer: Alexandra
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Date: 03/08/07 - 05:21PM
Title: No More Playing Nice
at least he knows her name. he didn't make a good impression on her mom though. who is sarah?
Author's Response: Sarah? Hmmm.....
Reviewer: smrkks
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Date: 03/08/07 - 05:12PM
Title: No More Playing Nice
well, improvements are being made... he remembers her name. lol. i love how i was reading this update during my spanish class todaay. anywaaay... love it. update again soon.
Author's Response: Yes, he remembers her name. LOL Gotta love a little extra reading :)
Reviewer: Crazy8
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Date: 03/08/07 - 03:28PM
Title: No More Playing Nice
i can't believe he actually did that. at least bethany got her side heard.
Author's Response: To say the least! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Mel
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Date: 03/08/07 - 03:09PM
Title: No More Playing Nice
good for bethany. it's about time she stood up for herself. who is sarah? her name appeared in a earlier chapter didn't it? you are tricky.
Author's Response: She has found her center I guess! Now when have I ever thrown you guys for a loop?
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