Reviews For Raw Intimacy
Reviewer: d_simplicity Signed Date: 03/06/07 - 08:29PM Title: S.O.S.

oh boy this is not good at all. He needs help before he kills himself from a drug overdose. Why is he like that? What's wrong with him? Oh i hope bethany can get through to him and fast. It's so sad i want to cry...that was a fantastic chapter. Update soon! :-D

Author's Response: He's close to losing himself. Glad you like the chapter and thanks for the feedback. More update sare coming.


Reviewer: Crazy8 Signed Date: 03/06/07 - 08:22PM Title: S.O.S.

that was so good! update soon because I need more.

Author's Response: Updates are coming, I swear!


Reviewer: couture Signed Date: 03/06/07 - 08:04PM Title: S.O.S.

Justin is a hot mess. I love that she's starting to talk back to him. This story is amazing! Keep it up.

Author's Response: Bethany couldn't hold it back anymore. I'm thrilled you like the story and more is coming.


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 03/06/07 - 08:00PM Title: S.O.S.

oh justin...didn't his momma ever teach him drugs are bad? great update as usual!

Author's Response: She may have, but I don't think the message got through. Thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: Lovergirl Signed Date: 03/06/07 - 07:47PM Title: S.O.S.

he's such an ass! damn he needs serious help.

Author's Response:

Help is exactly what the doctor ordered.


Reviewer: Alexandra Signed Date: 03/06/07 - 07:31PM Title: S.O.S.

that was intense hon. but i loved it!

Author's Response: Good cause more is coming.


Reviewer: sexybacknurse Signed Date: 03/06/07 - 12:53PM Title: Life Line

ok so you have done it again... im hooked again!  love the new story! 



Author's Response: Glad to hear it, I like hooking people :)


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 03/05/07 - 06:52PM Title: Life Line

i would love it so much if justin could like stop being a dick. lol. im sure that's not happening any time soon tho. love it. as usual.

Author's Response: Wouldn't that be nice? He's got a long way to go... Thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: d_simplicity Signed Date: 03/05/07 - 12:45PM Title: Life Line

Hmm i wonder what's up with her mom. And justin, that boy needs a serious beating. She shuda spit in his drink or something..haha no im kidding that's just gross. But still, he needs a rude awakening because this is so ridiculous. I'm angry for bethany...she's strong though. If it was me i'd probably be fired already. hahaha...great update. Waiting for more...



Author's Response:

I would have been fired too. I don't take crap easily from the male race, what can I say? lol Thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: Stella Signed Date: 03/05/07 - 12:31PM Title: Life Line

you are so good! i love this story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)





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