Reviews For Raw Intimacy
Reviewer: ktiger2004 Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 04:35PM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

ooOoo so i cannot wait to see what happens next!  great great story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I try my best.


Reviewer: LuLu Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 03:33PM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

Excellent chapter! Good for Justin to voluntarily put himself into rehab. I love the connection that has formed between Justin & Beth. The silent understanding they have and the support she gives him without being overbearing.

There's Lynn....and crazy Cameron right behind her. I forsee a problem with her when Justin gets out of rehab. They both might be a problem for Beth & Justin's relationship, the way they both were eying her.

Can't wait for more!

P.S. Yet another great song that I love. Girl you have good taste in music.



Author's Response: That is exactly what I was going for in their relationship, more of emotional and supportive connection as apposed to a full intervention from Beth. Cam and Lynn will be... well you'll find out. And as for the music, THANK YOU. I love rock and felt the story needed more edge that went with the intense/meaningful scenes.


Reviewer: d_simplicity Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 01:37PM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

That was bitter sweet. I enjoyed this chap so much. But Cam needs to go. And i love the chemistry with Justin and Beth. He'd really trying that's sweet. Finally he gets help! I wonder what other crazy things are in store for those two. Waiting for the next updat. ^_^



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Cam is going to be a challenge but I'm thrilled you like Justin and Beth's relationship. Things are going to roll!


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 12:32PM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

Wow, that was intense.  I really hope Justin can get better!  Great work, love the story

Author's Response:

Justin's trying to take his habit seriously, let's hope he gets better. Thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: Lovergirl Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 11:14AM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

he needed to go to rehab. gia is so funny btw, love beth!

Author's Response: Glad you like everyone, I love writing about them. More is on the way and thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 11:11AM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

i'm so glad he's in rehab...it's just what that boy needed. and the connection between him and beth is really sweet. great chapter!

Author's Response:

Justin finally decided to enter rehab. I'm glad you like their connection so far, cause after rehab, it'd going to get good ;)


Reviewer: Crazy8 Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 09:39AM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

i'm glad he's finally getting help. now he and bethany can hook up!

Author's Response: LOL Beth and Justin are taking it one step at a time. Thanks for the review.


Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 09:37AM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

well i'm glad he finally decided to get help...now let's see how he is on the flipside!  update again soon...

Author's Response: Yes, he finally decided to take the plunge. When he gets out though, the real story begins...


Reviewer: Stella Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 09:28AM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

really really good. update soon.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, more is coming.


Reviewer: Mel Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 09:12AM Title: Help For The Lost & Lonely

i love this story so much! wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)





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