Reviews For Raw Intimacy
Reviewer: Mel Signed Date: 03/18/07 - 10:04AM Title: Real World

i'm in love with these characters. i love this story!

Author's Response: Aaaww, thanks so much!


Reviewer: Lovergirl Signed Date: 03/18/07 - 09:27AM Title: Real World

that was an amazing chapter. the two of them finally talking, just great.

Author's Response: Thanks, they are trying at least to make some progress.


Reviewer: Alexandra Signed Date: 03/18/07 - 09:17AM Title: Real World

that was great. love it, update soon Mags.

Author's Response: Only for you Alex.


Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 03/18/07 - 08:56AM Title: Real World

wow, they're really starting to get close!  it's nice of justin to finally sit down and listen to her for once.  updare again soon!

Author's Response: Finally! LOL Thay needed a little heart to heart. Thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/18/07 - 08:46AM Title: Real World

Woo, a step in the right direction :)  I think that was good for the both of them!  I love this story.

Author's Response:

Both Justin and Bethany needed a step in the right direction. I'm so thrilled you love the story and thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: sexybacknurse Signed Date: 03/18/07 - 08:46AM Title: Real World

Love that latest chapter... as i get ready to make the four hour drive to go see justin in concert tonight!  Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Wow, that's a long way to drive. Hope you had a great time. Updates are coming soon!


Reviewer: d_simplicity Signed Date: 03/17/07 - 03:19PM Title: Sarah

Oh wow...no wonder beth is like that with him. I hope that makes him wake up a bit. I'm glad they're getting along better...but i'm wondering what Johnny told her...And if justin asks beth questions about sarah i wonder what would happen. Waiting for the next update. :-D

Author's Response:

Yes, Beth had a reason for her actions. You'll have to keep reading to find out what happens next. Love the reviews :)


Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 03/17/07 - 10:37AM Title: Sarah

oh wow...well now it all makes sense.  hopefully justin takes the hint and kicks his habit so beth doesn't have to see someone else die like that...update again soon!

Author's Response: Hopefully, but Justin is a little slow to take a hint. Thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: vessy Signed Date: 03/17/07 - 05:01AM Title: Sarah

awesome work!


Author's Response: Thanks so much!


Reviewer: LuLu Signed Date: 03/17/07 - 12:47AM Title: Sarah

Uh oh what did Johnny say? Was he a jerk to Beth too?

Ok like 2 of my assumptions about Sarah were right, that she was dead and that it was drug related.

I can't wait to see how Justin acts around Beth now that he knows. Maybe he'll start to consider getting some help.



Author's Response: You'll just have to wait to find out about what Johnny had to say. As for Justin, he hopefully will take the hint and get some help.





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