Reviews For Raw Intimacy
Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 10:28AM Title: Game, Set, Match

woooooooooooo!  awesome update!  please gimme more soon!

Author's Response: More is on the way!


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 08:06AM Title: Game, Set, Match

Oooh....things are starting to get interesting.  I really enjoy reading this story.  I like how the plot is working so far, and I really can't wait to find out where this is headed :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. The plot is a little different from what I usually try to do so I'm thrilled to have any feedback on it.


Reviewer: ktiger2004 Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 11:26PM Title: Game, Set, Match

haha love the last three lines! keep it up this is such a wonderful story.

Author's Response: LOL Glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback.


Reviewer: Sweetchic05 Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 10:23PM Title: Game, Set, Match

lol love it keep it coming!!!

Author's Response: More is coming.


Reviewer: d_simplicity Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 08:07PM Title: Game, Set, Match

Wow, that was a refreshing chapter...i swear. they were civil with each other practically the entire time. I'm glad. :-D. Justin is definitely warming up to beth because she "saved his life" if u wanna call it that. Wonder how long it's going to last. And who is sarah??? :-S. I can't wait for more! :-D

Author's Response: Justin is warming up to Beth, a little bonding never hurt anyone. Sarah is coming up so stay tuned :)


Reviewer: Lovergirl Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 06:58PM Title: Game, Set, Match

really funny and well written. great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!


Reviewer: Crazy8 Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 06:39PM Title: Game, Set, Match

i love the banter between the two of them, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks, they are fun characters to write about.


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 06:26PM Title: Game, Set, Match

i just absolutely adore this story. seriously. and even justin and his nastiness are growing on me. can we get to the juice asap tho? i cant wait anymore. lol. love it.

Author's Response: I think Justin can grow on anyone. lol The juice is coming, I swear. Thanks for the review.


Reviewer: Stella Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 05:18PM Title: Game, Set, Match

that was so great, though i would like to know about sarah!

Author's Response: Sarah is coming, look for her in the next chapter.


Reviewer: LuLu Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 05:14PM Title: Game, Set, Match

I love Justin and Bethany's banter..

Best line of the chapter: "If Justin gets out of line, stab him..." LMAO!Gia is too funny.

I think I'm seeing a connection bt Sarah, where she is and Bethany's past that may have a lot in common with Justin's present.



Author's Response: Gotta love Gia. You are closer than you think about Sarah... Thanks for the feedback.





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