Reviews For Raw Intimacy
Reviewer: Mel Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 05:04PM Title: Game, Set, Match

justin loves being with beth, but jake really needs to get out of the way hon. now!

Author's Response: Keep reading to find out!


Reviewer: Alexandra Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 04:57PM Title: Game, Set, Match

who is sarah? did you forget that I will not stop until I know? I will stalk you!

Author's Response: I swear I will keep you in the dark no longer! Next chapter Alex.


Reviewer: CutiePie07 Signed Date: 03/15/07 - 04:39PM Title: It's Bethany

Whoa, just whoa! I've just read the first 2 chapters and I'm hooked, literally. This is great! I love how you write the character Justin and depict him as lonely, drug-abusive celebrity. I just love it!

Author's Response: Thanks, I thought it would be interesting point of veiw to do since Justin is very popular to write about. Love the feedback.


Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed Date: 03/14/07 - 02:10PM Title: Here For You

Aww, the ending was great, I hope that Beth can help Justin and his crazy ways. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it, thanks for the review.


Reviewer: alimera Signed Date: 03/14/07 - 10:15AM Title: Here For You

aww...they think they hate each other but beth actually feels for him and justin needs the comfort...perfect combo!  lol...update again soon!

Author's Response: The bestt of both worlds you might say. Thanks for the review.


Reviewer: vessy Signed Date: 03/14/07 - 09:35AM Title: Here For You

awesome, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much.


Reviewer: LuLu Signed Date: 03/13/07 - 11:35PM Title: Here For You

Damn coke and herione? Rehab is definitely in his future, can't get off those 2 w/o.

Wow the end there actually made me go "aww". He's so pitiful - I could leave him in a state like that either. Looks like Beth is the slavation he needs.



Author's Response: Saving grace you might say. Rehab is definitly what you need if you are hooked though. Thanks for the review.


Reviewer: MiracleBabe Signed Date: 03/13/07 - 11:08PM Title: Here For You

Now i'm happy because it's finally happened. Not them getting somewhere near close to each other but her getting rid of his drugs. He was headed for self destruction. He won't remember firing her in the morning. I love this story so much good writing on your part . Iwish I held this blessed talent of writing I got a lot to tell.lol Looking forward to more soon.

Author's Response: Justin has a ways to go before he's in the clear. Thanks so much, I'm sure you have your own unique talents. Thanks for the review.


Reviewer: jeannie Signed Date: 03/13/07 - 10:57PM Title: Here For You

aww theyre getting closer... i swear beth is too nice to justin.. (id break his face if i were her lol) and now shes comforting him? hmmm very interesting! loves it!

Author's Response: Really, really nice. I would so have kicked his ass if it was me, but then again, I've never had Beth's life...


Reviewer: Alexandra Signed Date: 03/13/07 - 06:31PM Title: Here For You

really, really good. loved it.

Author's Response:

Thanks Alex!





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