Reviews For when it was me
Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 02:23PM Title: rose

star is my favorite character. lol. but, really, im already feeling bad for nora, which means that in a few chapters i'll feel even worse. which sucks. not that i expected any different but stillll. can we please be nice to her?



Author's Response: star would be your favorite. if this is another ploy to get me to tell y ou whats going to happen....my lips are sealed :) - ashley


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 12:40PM Title: rose

That wasn't as disasterous as I thought it could be....I'm so torn though, I haven't found anyone to hate yet!! lol....great stuff girls

Author's Response: i'm glad that disaster was averted for a small time for you :) ao for finding someone to hate...good luck lol thanks again for reviewing, we appriciate it so much :)- ashley


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 03/22/07 - 12:10PM Title: rose

Yes, because taking your ex girlfriend's number when clearly you have unresolved issues with her is a real smart move, dumb ass. Holding on is a way to let go on this strange planet you live on, huh? Dumb ass *lol*

Author's Response: lol. and already hollie seems to see justin as a jerk. that didn't take long. - leslie


Reviewer: chelsia Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 09:53PM Title: the heart of the matter

Becca...Nora...Justin...this is getting good. more please?

Author's Response: and it begins to get complicated...and i do mean begins lol thanks for the review and we're woking on more :)- ashley


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 04:27PM Title: the heart of the matter

I wish I could put into words how spectacular I really think you both are.  I don't have them though.  I don't know the things that would covey how I feel when I read what you two write, but it's a good feeling, a deep feeling.  I know it sounds so cheesy and so contrived, but honestly, I absolutly adore reading the things you create.  It's more real than most anything else I've found on this site, and believe me, I've found a lot.  I am so glad that you are willing to share this talent with the rest of us.  It takes me away from here, if even for a moment.

Author's Response: wow. that\'s all i can say. W-O-W! thank you, moose. i really appreciate the feedback. we (ashley & i) love love love you and your amazing reviews and they are the reason we share our writing. and it doesn\'t sound cheesy or contrived. i\'m a writing major, so i know the feeling you are talking about. and the fact that i had anything to do with eliciting that feeling reminds me i am in the right major. -leslie


Reviewer: JamieLynn Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 04:08PM Title: the heart of the matter

Ok...now I'm even more intrigued. I really really like this story. Awesome job guys!

Author's Response: we're just glad people are liking this as much as we are. thanks for the review!!- ashley


Reviewer: smrkks Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 04:00PM Title: the heart of the matter

welllll... this is interesting. lol. im still gauging my feelings on the girls but i def like the story line.

Author's Response: its oinly going to get more interesting...promise :) let us know when you pick lol- ashley


Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 03:35PM Title: the heart of the matter

Intrigue. Mmm-hmm... yeah, I'd make a more substantive comment but that would involve me thinking of one. Love ya both


Author's Response:

i guess we'll let you pass this time hollie...lol glad its keeping your attention- ashley


Reviewer: Maggie Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 12:48PM Title: turn on me

I really like it, but of course when you combine to genius writers, what do you expect? <3



Author's Response: lol. thanks. we\'re enjoying the story quite a bit ourselves. -leslie


Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 03/16/07 - 07:53AM Title: turn on me

I don't know how you two do it, but I love this story already.  I have no idea where it's headed, but I like that too....you're both amazing. 

Author's Response: thank you. :) and we\'re glad we can keep you on your toes! -leslie





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