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Reviewer: Hobs
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Date: 03/16/07 - 06:53AM
Title: turn on me
They're so sweet!! I like them. If you split them up for the ex I may have to kill you both.
Author's Response: ummm no comment? - ashley
i liked the third person more.. but it's a good start.. please update!!
Author's Response: understandable...but the first person will make much more sense as time goes by. thanks for reading and reviewing- ashley
Reviewer: smrkks
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Date: 03/15/07 - 10:32PM
Title: turn on me
so i think i like the first person more than the third. i just cant help myself... i fall madly in love with your characters when you write them first person. lol. the thing is, ash, is that i can feel the heart break and it's scaring meeeee.
Author's Response: you keep trying to have me give details away...ain't going to happen lol. i'm glad the pov we picked serves for more likable characters lol- ashley
Reviewer: JamieLynn
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Date: 03/15/07 - 10:22PM
Title: turn on me
Ok, I am very much intrigued. Like mucho grande intrigued! I like, I like a lot!
Author's Response: lol intrigue is always good. we're so glad people are liking it so far, much more to come :)- ashley
Reviewer: Moose
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Date: 03/13/07 - 02:07PM
Title: by and by
You guys kill me, ya know? I mean, all these amazing stories that I have to keep up with, and now you're starting another equally amazing one....I love it! Anyway, I don't think I need to tell you that I can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: yay! one of my favorite reviewers!! so glad you're liking it. we're almost too excited about the idea lol - ashley
Reviewer: Hobs
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Date: 03/13/07 - 12:45PM
Title: by and by
Leslie AND Ashley? Marvellous. Twice the reason to read and twice the number of people to hit when I'm annoyed with the characters. Maaaarvellous!!!
Author's Response: oh no. we\'re giving hollie too much power. lol. -leslie
Reviewer: matthews baby
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Date: 03/13/07 - 01:17AM
Title: by and by
Dunno if I'm diggin the present tense but I like the story so far most def. Author's Response: well...kepp reading and hopefully it will grow on you? thanks for the review :)- ashley
Reviewer: smrkks
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Date: 03/12/07 - 10:19PM
Title: by and by
mmm the beer moment reminded me of my honey bunches of oats craving last night. lol. i am sososo excited for this story. and this was a good start. even though i have already predicted that heartbreak is on the horizon and i won't be able to choose which one of these girls i like more. *siiiiiigh* as usual. torturing poor lil stacey. but i love it and i cant wait for more. so that's a good sign i suppose.
Author's Response: good advertiisng is deadly i tell you lol as for predictions we aren't going to give away much...- ashley
Reviewer: chelsia
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Date: 03/12/07 - 09:43PM
Title: by and by
look at you two starting a new story together. I'm pretty darn excited for it. First chapter is amazing and I want more....soon?
Author's Response: we're pretty excited too. figured we'd try it out see what kind of damage we can do. :) thanks for the revewi :)
Reviewer: smooches01
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Date: 03/12/07 - 08:44PM
Title: by and by
So good! More, more, more!
Author's Response: thank you very much! -leslie
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