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Reviewer: Hobs
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Date: 03/24/07 - 05:30AM
Title: he's sure to cry
what kind of logic is that? You'll feel guilty about passing your kid off to its grandmother but a nanny is just fine? Huh. weird. Anyway, fyi, nursery rhyme as we're taught it is 'ring a ring o'roses, a pocket full of posies, atishoo, atishoo, we all fall down.' And for your useless piece of info for the day, it describes bubonic plague symptoms, which I gotta tell you really stopped any thoughts I had of it being cute.
Author's Response: girls are odd all around. LOL atishoo, what the **** does that mean? oh well, its supposed to be kind of sad so i'll take it lol
Reviewer: smrkks
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Date: 03/23/07 - 11:57PM
Title: he's sure to cry
you know, ash, im trying REALLY hard to like justin and to sympathize with him right now. but i'm not having any luck. at least he's being a nice daddy. at least. and, well, these two need to fix themselves. which obviously translates to "you need to fix them ASAP." i liked the update, though, even though these two kids pissed me off.
Author's Response: i love playing with your emotions through the story stace lol and justin well....he's not always going to be a sex god lol keep reading girl lol
Reviewer: chelsia
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Date: 03/23/07 - 08:45PM
Title: he's sure to cry
and a nanny enters the mix. amazing. at first i thought kate and justin would get together but now i'm questioning that. possibly the nanny? or who knows what else you've got up your sleeve. perfect chapter! Author's Response: trying to keep you on your toes....i've got lots of plans lol thanks for reading and reviewing
Reviewer: Sassy Spacey
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Date: 03/23/07 - 07:56PM
Title: he's sure to cry
Wow. That was really good. I'm really enjoying this story. It's so different then like the typical story "having a baby together and magically getting along" Awesome job. :-D. -Traci Author's Response: that's what i'm going for, the little twists. I'm glad you're liking it!
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
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Date: 03/23/07 - 07:04PM
Title: cradle and all
interesting interesting. i like this so far. gotta admit, though, when i first saw the little nursery rhyme i was worried. the first thing i thought of was "oh shit, they're gonna die of the plague"...don't let that happen please...well, at least not literally. update soon. :D
Author's Response: i knew about the plague thing, but i took the risk. i just hope it works lol glad you like it thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Maggie
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Date: 03/23/07 - 06:59PM
Title: he's sure to cry
I really like this story. Actually I should say love. It's nice to enjoy a story so much, gives me a little break from work and school.
Author's Response: ahhh thanks so much! i know what its like to have a break so i'm glad this could do that for you :)
Reviewer: Moose
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Date: 03/23/07 - 06:55PM
Title: he's sure to cry
Hmph, not such a fairy tale, this one. I like it though. It's new, and it's interesting, and I love following these two characters :) amazing, as usual!
Author's Response: not really a fairy tale, no lol but things will get lighter promise :) thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Sassy Spacey
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Date: 03/22/07 - 11:55AM
Title: cradle and all
OoOo. It's really good so far, I can't wait for you to update more. :) Awesome job. -Traci Author's Response: thanks so much! i'm glad people are reading, makes me right faster :)
Reviewer: vessy
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Date: 03/22/07 - 08:42AM
Title: cradle and all
i like it, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: yay! people like it! writing as fast as i can lol
Reviewer: Hobs
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Date: 03/22/07 - 04:45AM
Title: cradle and all
Huh. Do they teach you that nursery rhyme differently in the US or is it just Ashley doing her author bit to it? Anyway, loved it.
Author's Response: i think i got the words right....how to they teach it over there? so glad hollie liked it lol
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