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Reviewer: Whtny
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/05 - 04:12PM
Title: chapter 3
how'd i just now find this one?
luvs it pms
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 07/31/04 - 10:22AM
Title: chapter 3
I really like this story. I started reading it last month and I added it to my favorites. But I'd almost given up hope for any new chapters (LOL). So, I hope it won't be so long before you update again. I really want to see what happens.
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/04 - 09:11AM
Title: chapter 3
Ooo i'm enjoying this story. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: aimee
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/04 - 02:39PM
Title: Chapter 2
i like where this is going, i think, but a lot of the parts you have in here, are just unrealistic. i mean, the stock's? five hundred thousand? then only two hundred of another? they've got to be realistic.
Reviewer: MrsKateChasez
Signed
Date: 05/14/04 - 01:20PM
Title: chapter 1
It started out with a good plotline and everything, but when you read chapter two, you're bombarded with unneccessary pictures of underwear. I just don't understand the relavence to the story the pictures serve. Also, descriptions of clothing do not have to be so exact and have little pictures. It's okay to say "she pulled on a pair of jeans and a black tank top." Whatever. Nice try, i just don't get the pictures... they kind of annoyed me.
Reviewer: aimee
Anonymous
Date: 05/12/04 - 02:14PM
Title: chapter 1
it's a decent story line but a few things are REALLY bugging me. the pictures for one, not really needed. the changing point of view as another. in some sentances it says 'i' in another it says 'she'. it gets confusing. and the last one is...if she is working at 'diesel' why in the world would she wear another designers outfit?
Reviewer: Christine
Anonymous
Date: 05/12/04 - 02:13PM
Title: chapter 1
I have to agree with the picture thing. It is really good though. Hope to see more soon. : )
Reviewer: xkcfanx
Signed
Date: 05/12/04 - 01:55PM
Title: chapter 1
the ONLY problem I have with this is the pictures....they kind of annoy me lol...not to be rude...but it doesnt make it enjoyable...good visuals to see what they look like...but I dont think its really necessary :)
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