WOW!! thats really all i have to say....that was really good. its so ture too, cause there are a lot of girls out there that are not sooo skinney and all and didn't have many boyfriends....and the hot looking guy goes after her :O) i loved it
Author's Response: Thank you Ally!!! That's a story that came straight from my heart so it was easy to write it! I really appreciate your feedback!! :o)
I give this vizzy a 10! I think it's a good written story and once you start reading it you can't stop till it's finished! I just love the fact that the girl isn't a skinny model who "plays" a virgin. There are a lot of girls that aren't very skinny and that haven't had a boyfriend in years. It makes the vizzy believable and you start to feel sympathy for the girl. It's great that she gets the good-looking guy and he really loves her.
The ending is sad but it's a great ending for this story.
Keep up writing stories like this Manue!!
Author's Response: Thank you Sabina!!! I really appriciated the long review and it's my first one too!! So thank you very much!!
